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PostSubject: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:41 pm

Ok...first fanfic in a while...the starts short cause I wanna know what you think before I write more XP

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Leah's.P.O.V

I curled up in his arms, the first time I’d properly been happy since Sam imprinted with Emily, I was happy for them, but he left me heartbroken. Not that I cared anymore anyway. A small sigh escaped me as the corners of my mouth turned up into a smile. I looked at his face, taking in his features for the...I’d lost count how many times I’d done this since he told me her wanted me now.
“You have no idea how happy I am here with you right now” I said looking up into his eyes
“I could say the same thing” he said with a smile planting a kiss on the top of my head


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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:43 pm

I like it! But, it's weird not to see Leah all defensive and stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:43 pm

O: Who is it???? xDD

I love it Roseeee. <3 -hugglestight-
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:44 pm

I thought she finally deserved someone lol

Thankies *huggles Amii back XP ))

I shall write more then

I shall reveal mystery man soon lmao
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:07 pm

L.P.O.V


I yawned silently, Sam was making us run patrols again and I’d been determined to prove that I was still the fastest runner in the pack even if Paul was catching up.
“Get some sleep” Was all I heard as my eyes slid shut.


Mystery.Man’s.P.O.V

I lofted her sleeping body with ease and walked into her room with her; I set her on the bed and lay beside her. I played with her hair for a while before hearing Sam’s howl. I grumbled under my breath before sitting up, I looked at Leah again; I grabbed a piece of paper and scribbled down a note.

Sam howled,
Be back soon
Love you always

X


I slipped the note onto her bedside table and moved silently through the Clearwater household outside. I pulled my clothes off as I jogged through the dark to the forest, tying my clothes to my ankle before phasing whilst running.
‘What’ I thought a little harsher then I should’ve. Paul growled in his thoughts, I rolled my eyes.
‘Is it true?’ Sam asked me, I gave a moan as he asked
‘Is what true?’ I teased
‘This is not the time for joking.’ He thought, ‘Is it true?’
‘Yes’ I thought simply before being rammed in the side by something huge and furry, I growled on instinct as I got up to see who hit me, ‘Seth!?’
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:44 pm

OHHH? Who is HE??????????????
I like it!!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:46 pm

Haha, thank you XP
The next bit is coming up in just a second..another short bit I do believe XP
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:46 pm

I luv it but it is weird not to see leah so defensive. who is the mystery man
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:47 pm

Next bit as promised XP
All is revealed

M.M.P.O.V

‘What?’ Seth snapped at me
‘Why did you do that?’ I asked him phasing so the others couldn’t hear the conversation, Seth phased too and looked at me.
‘Well,’ He started, ‘I was at the Cullen’s and Nessie started screaming, finally after much calming from Jasper and Edward being called back from a hunting trip were we able to find out why she cause the scene’ I bit my lip slightly, poor Nessie, I looked at Seth as he looked up at me.
‘Is she ok?’ I asked him, he raised an eyebrow and scowled
‘Like you wouldn’t know’ He snapped back, ‘Of course she’s not ok’ He added harshly, ‘You broke your imprint with her’
I closed my eyes, great; the Cullen’s were probably out to get me now. I sighed and phased back, the others were thinking questions at me.
‘Yes it’s true’ I snapped at them
‘Who was it?’ Sam asked still sounding calm, I kept running, the forest blurring to a huge green and brown smudge, ‘Jacob! Who managed to break your imprint?’
I growled before finally answering
‘Leah’ I thought closing my eyes, then I was hit in the side again, ‘Damn it Seth’
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:50 pm

omg really
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:52 pm

Uhh.... I am... speechless. Totally speechless.
Jake broke his imprint?!
How can you do that??
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:54 pm

Haha, well I though Leah deserved someone to love her...since everything with Sam went wrong for her...and I find Nessie to perfect and unbelievable *shrug*
I thought about how Heath and Zoey's imprint broke in Chosen and based it around that I guess lol
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:56 pm

thatis so good u should write more please!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:02 pm

write more it is so good
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:03 pm

True, very true! But their imprint was remade again later.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:10 pm

I'm writing as we speak XP
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:12 pm

k write faster
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:54 pm

It's awsome, Rose!!!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:58 pm

Thank you Namine XD
It means alot to hear your opinion too since you're amazing at writing lol

I have a little more..but I wanna add some more to it before posting lol...Should be up before I go though =]
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:06 pm

You're welcome. And thanks, it means a lot to me to hear I'm an amazing writer.

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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:27 pm

Ok...so I got caught up in some other stuff and this bit isn't as long as I hoped it would be...but I'm posting what I've got anyway XD

~~~~~

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I woke up in my bed, I sat up fast…Had I been dreaming, I better not have been. I sighed in happiness and wandered to the shower. I showered fast, dressed and went to the kitchen. Seth stormed in as I finished cooking the eggs and bacon.
“Hey” I said happier then I’d been in a while, he glared at me, I took a deep breath, “So the pack knows?” I asked
“Yes the pack knows” He said looking at me, he looked...not so much angry, confused I guessed. “How could you do this” He continued, my eyes widened.
“How could I do this” I repeated getting a little angry now, “Seth” I said my voice rising slightly, “It’s an imprint, it’s not like I chose for this to happen”
Tears welled in my eyes due to my anger at him; I slammed the plate of breakfast on the table and sat tears rolling down my face now. I finished eating quickly and shoved the plate in the sink before storming outside, slamming the door behind me as I left. Shaking in anger as I walked, I refused to phase; I’d only get that all again if I did. I headed for the forest muttering under my breath. The tears now running freely down my cheeks, I headed into the darker part of the forest, somewhere I could hide from the world, I sighed and slumped to the ground.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:30 pm

Awsome! And sad!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:51 pm

that is good but sad. poor leah seth shouldn't be so mean but also poor nessie she really liked jacob i think
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:30 pm

Seth.P.O.V

I sighed as Leah left the house, I’d upset her. I hadn’t meant to I just felt sorry for Nessie, seeing a friend in that pain had got to be, but I was glad my sister was finally happy, we all knew how hard it was for her when Sam imprinted with Emily. I wandered over to the fridge and found the last of the eggs and bacon, I cooked them quick and shovelled them down. I washed the plates in the sink and headed for the couch where I sprawled myself and slept.

I woke up to Sam’s howl, I growled about never being able to sleep anymore but ran out to the forest pulling clothes off in the process and phasing.
‘You called Sam’ I thought whilst running through the trees
‘Yes’ I heard him, ‘We’re just waiting for the others’ he added just as Paul and Jared turned up too. After a couple of minutes Quil’s thoughts were added to the few going round in my head and then Embry’s soon after. One by one the other pack members thoughts added to the collection there already, all except Leah and Jacob’s, Sam growled and howled again, eventually Leah arrived.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:43 pm

that is good. I would hate to be leah right now.
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