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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:10 pm

Here's more =]
Leah's POV


L.P.O.V

‘What?!’ I snapped as I phased and had all their thoughts flood into my head
‘Don’t snap at us’ Sam ordered, the bad thoughts I’d been thinking melted away even as I tried to hold onto them, I growled
‘Why couldn’t you leave me alone’ I asked, ‘That’s all I wanted’ I felt Seth, Jared, Quil, Embry, Colin and Brady pull their thoughts back, as if they were trying to exclude themselves from the conversation going on in their heads. Sam and Paul stayed forward, Sam because I’d aimed the question at him and Paul because he was getting angry at my attitude and possibly because he liked to stick his noise in. Paul obviously heard my thought about him liking to stick his nose in as he growled, Jared snickered in his thoughts and I rolled my eyes.
‘I’m sorry’ I told them, ‘I really am…but I can’t help my feelings for Jake’ I explained as I laid on the ground, ‘It’s an imprint, you guys who have one will know what I mean about this...I seriously can not help this.’ Sam sighed as Paul calmed down.
‘Sorry’ Paul thought quickly towards me, ‘I understand’ he added
I smiled as I lay there, ‘Thank you’ I told him. ‘Now where’s Jacob?’ I asked realising his thoughts, the only ones I wanted to hear, weren’t there.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:18 pm

J.P.O.V

I looked at the house, the huge house surrounded by trees. I could hear the water in the lake at the bottom of the garden, and the sounds of them inside. Angry, harsh whispers, they knew I was hear. I sighed and phased, I should be human for this.
I pulled my shorts on and headed for the house. I stopped at the door. Before the imprint had broken the Cullen’s had got used to me just walking in whenever I got here, but now was different, not after what had happened. I turned as I heard Sam’s howl, he wanted to talk to us, the whole pack, I sighed and turned to face the door. It opened as I raised my hand to knock.
It was Rosalie, she scowled at me, I scowled back.
“What do you want?” She snarled, “Haven’t you caused enough pain already?”
I pushed past her, I really couldn’t be bothered to argue with her, not today. I headed straight into the living room; the Cullen’s were there, all of them. Rosalie ran past and took her place at Emmett’s side; on her other side was Bella, then little Nessie and then Edward. They all looked up and glared at me, all but Nessie. I sighed.
“I’m sorry” I said, my voice barely over a whisper, “I couldn’t help it” I added quickly. Edward looked at me, one second he was on the couch, the next he was in my face, I stepped back.
“Edward” I heard Bella’s voice, Edward tore his gaze from my face to turn to his wife, the girl I’d once loved, I averted my eyes to the ground.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:48 pm

that isso good.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:49 pm

Thank you XP
I'm thinking of what to write now Smile
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:52 pm

i think it should be something to do with what the cullens are saying to jacob. but then jacob should phase and him and leah can be close againg. that would be cute
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:55 pm

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I'll post the next bit soon XP
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:59 pm

kool i cant wait to hear it it is so good right now
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:00 pm

cannot wait Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:24 pm

Amazing! I really liked it!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:29 pm

Thank you XP

Here's some from Edward


Edward.P.O.V

I glared at Jacob until I heard Bella’s voice, Bella, my beautiful Bella. I tore my eyes away from the mutt to look at her; I rushed to her side knowing she wouldn’t like any of the thoughts running through my head right now. Jacob looked at the ground ashamed, so he should be, after what he did to my little girl. I looked away from Bella to Renesmee, tears still falling down her cheeks, I moved in front of her protectively, blocking her from his view, he wouldn’t see her like this. Jacob looked at me, realising that I was obscuring his view of Nessie he tried to peer round me, I moved swiftly reading his thoughts and knowing which way he would try to go next. He lunged forward, I held our a marble arm stopping him from moving closer.
“I think it would be best you leave now Jacob” I said, my voice stern, he sighed and turned,
“I’m sorry” he repeated, I knew he was, the power of an imprint was way beyond just him, but he’d broken my little girls heart, and he wasn’t going to get round us all that easily.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:34 pm

Sad but good!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:34 pm

It's hard writing from Edward's POV XP

Well it was for me *shrug*
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:35 pm

Dunno, I've never written from his POV. Seems like it would be with the mind reading and all.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:38 pm

Lol...It's harded then some of the other characters because you know him better then them...when I write from Leah's POV, because I don't know her as well as Bella or Edward I can write what I want..my style of writing, when it's Edward I try to make it sound more like Edward...I dred thinking about writing from Bella's since my writing style (in my opinion) is different from S.M's
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:39 pm

That makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:40 pm

I thought so =]
Writing as Bella's going to be a pain in the butt...although I plan to write as her next XP
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:41 pm

Haha, cool.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:52 pm

Here's Bella XP

Bella.P.O.V

Jacob left, I looked at Edward raising my shield for a few moments so he could hear what I was thinking. He nodded slowly and I rose from the chair. Renesmee looked up at me, fresh tears falling from her eyes. I gave her a small smile she didn’t return, I sighed and squeezed her hand gently before moving out of the house. I saw Jacob heading for the forest, trembling slightly;
“Jake” I said, my voice no more then a whisper, he turned to look at me but didn’t speak. I moved to his side and placed my hand on his arm, he didn’t flinch away from the cold like he used to.
“Jacob” I said looking up at him,
“Bella” He said, emotion straining in his voice, I closed my eyes and looked back at the house,
“I know you didn’t mean for it to happen” I told him, “I understand that you couldn’t have stopped it.” Jacob sighed and looked at me;
“I’m sorry” He said for the third time in the past 10 minutes
“It isn’t me you should be apologising too” I said truthfully, “But I don’t think today’s a good day” I added as he stepped back towards the house. He looked at me and nodded, “She’s been through a lot today, the break was very painful for her” I explained, “Edward, Alice, Rosalie, Emmett and I were hunting” I told him looking up into his dark eyes, “Carlisle was at the hospital, Esme was working in the garden and Jasper was home with Nessie and Seth. Seth was round looking after Ness whilst we took a hunting trip, we’d only been gone a few hours when we got a panicked call from Esme. Nessie was screaming in pain, more pain then anyone had ever seen in there life. We hurried back and finally Edward could tell us why. Nessie knew what was happening the whole time it was Jake” I looked down, Jacob turned, apologising once again and running for the forest, tears streaming down his face as he went.
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:24 pm

so sad but i like it poor nessie
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:39 am

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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:38 pm

Yay Roseyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:42 pm

I take it you like xD
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:35 pm

it is so good idk why anyone wouldn't like it
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:38 pm

Haha =D
I havn't done any writing today...and I'm working tomorrow...I might have some more up by this time tmorrow XP
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PostSubject: Re: What Will The Cullen's Say?   Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:00 pm

Tell a lie..I have more now xD

J.P.O.V

I ran towards the forest, pushing myself to run faster. Tears stung in my eyes, poor Nessie, I felt sorry for her. The trembles running through my body increased and I felt myself phasing. I reached the edge of the forest and pulled my clothes off and tucked them in the string round my ankle before phasing into the huge russet wolf I was. Thoughts and questions flooded into my head as I pushed myself to run faster, the trees blurred and green surrounded me, I ignored the questions my brothers were asking, until I heard the voice, her voice.
‘Home’ was all she thought; I made a huge loop through the trees and headed for her house. I needed to see her, to see that all the pain I’d caused was worth it. I ran faster, the trees thinning as I got closer to the reservation. Eventually the first houses came into view. I pulled back into the trees and phased quickly, redressing myself as I walked. Then I saw her house, the Clearwater household, a smile moved across my face without thinking. I quickened my pace to get there, to see her quicker. I walked inside without knocking;
“Leah?”
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