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PostSubject: my poems   Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:04 am

im found to never cry
but yet i want so much to be found
im so tierd
cant you see i hurt so much
leave me be
im starting to break
there goes one peice
then the next
my heart is breaking
its sleeping in air
its burning in fire
its freezing in water
its smotherd in earth
its losing spirit
i cant stay awake any more
i think i'll just sleep one more time
i bid thy well
goodbye



this was the first poem i ever wrote so thts why its a little off
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:11 am

*-*!!!!!
this is really good!
you should write more!!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:01 pm

thanks heart stark
i do plan on writing more i have a hole journal
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:37 pm

my hours are weightless
not many left
you saved me once,will you save me again?
i find i have been taken
not ever to be returned
its coming faster now
dont worry ill be fine
ill just sleep one last time
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:22 am

some one help me
im losing life
i dont know who i am
help me please
when will i be found
im sliping
who are you?
i...i...
its to late
i cant be helped
there taking me away
i wont come back this time
im just going to let them take me
whats done is done
goodbye& and dont feel bad for me
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:44 am

you said that you loved me
i beleived you
you said you wanted to be with me forever
i thought you were telling the truth
thats when i got hert
you never came to see me but your brother did
he said youd been seein some one else
he said you never really loved me
the worst part was that i wished he was lieing
but he wasnt
then i got out
and i moved on
when you came to see me i was mad
you tried to tell me that your brother lied
you were the one that lied
your just a bitter memory now
i took back my heart
and gave it to some one else
and he really loved me
now were done and your gone
and thats the way it will always be
goodbye
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:22 pm

shallow grave wrote:
some one help me
im losing life
i dont know who i am
help me please
when will i be found
im sliping
who are you?
i...i...
its to late
i cant be helped
there taking me away
i wont come back this time
im just going to let them take me
whats done is done
goodbye& and dont feel bad for me

that one reminds me of The Host by Stephanie Meyer!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:24 pm

well mabe i should read the host i just thought of this and rote it
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:26 pm

ahahahahaha!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:40 pm

wht confused
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:48 pm

can you help me?
im lost
please help me
i dont want to go back there
they do terable things
im dieing becuase of them
cant i just sleep
you know what its time
i think ill go now
my heart is black now
youve never understood but thats fine
there calling
hey dont feel sorrow
im finaly happy now
goodbye!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:45 pm

^ i like that one! it sounds like something that would be on the ghost whisperer!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:47 pm

you know it does sound like that mabe if they turn it in to a song it could get put on ghost whisperer
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PostSubject: never care   Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:23 am

you think its fun
to beleive that life is going
great but-
when out side your mind
you know the world is ending

but you dont care
you never have
and never will
as long as you have your
own mind

youll never care

i was in a bad mood so i wrote this ^
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:40 am

dont you understand

you were alway there for me
then you went and broke my
heart
i know you didnt mean to
it wasnt your falt
but...

now youve gone
and left me behind
i know ill be with you
soon but it just hurts
i wish you were still here
ill still love you
and i still have your heart
i just wish it was still "beating"
i wish you would just
come back

but i know you cant
and i understand-
i have to move
but...
ill still love you
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:41 am

i made a couple of mistake ^ sry
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PostSubject: my life   Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:42 am

life is like an open wound
it cant be fixed
it sucks

my heart has turned black
please just back off
you dont belong im my heart
you caused my pain

ive been a fool
for so long
well not any more
ill find out what i am
but that still wont heal
my heart
oh well it dont matter
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:06 am

I really like this one, it remind me of the pain caused by a fool that broke your heart and you start viewing life like a black whole and nothing else matter. Keep it up, you are doing great!!! cheers
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:08 am

wow that one was really good i like it!!!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:12 pm

thnx Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:24 pm

no prob
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:40 pm

this poem isnt mine a friend sent it to me i thought u guys would like to see it
GLOOMY SUNDAY

sunday is gloomy.... my hours are
slumberless. dearest, the shadows i
live with are numberless. little white
flowers will never awaken you. not
where the black coach of sorrow has
taken you. angels have no thoughts
of ever returning you. would they be
angrey if i thought of joining you?
gloomy sunday. sunday is gloomy.
with shadows i send it all. my heart and
i have decided to end it all. soon
theyll be flowers and prayers that is
sad i know. let them not weep. let them
know that i am glad to go. death is no
dream. for in death im corrresing
you. every last breath of my soul ill be
blessing you. glommy sunday....
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:43 pm

woah thats good
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:50 pm

yeah its a 1990s suicide note my friend is goth so she lots of that stuff
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:17 pm

That poem is awesome, I like it a lot!! Very Happy
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