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PostSubject: i hate my life   Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:47 am

alright i think its time
listen im done
no one ever cares
what happens to me
well im done puttin up
with your attitude

you use to care
but now its like i
dont even know you
you refuse to be seen
with me just becuase
im not like the other
girls

and if im not good
enough for your social
list then we're done
you've been nothin but
mean, rude, and hateful
and if you loved me you
wouldnt care what they
thought... but i guess you do
so now your alone
and im movin on
*laughs im happy again*
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:50 am

i hope you like this one ^ i dont know what made me right it but i did so there u go
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:15 pm

i think i might stop for awile
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:35 pm

Awww...dont! they are really good =]
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:32 pm

thanks im just in a bit of a block i got a poetry book to see if i could clear my mind it helps somtimes
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:54 pm

hmmm...you should try listening to music you dont usually listen to. like, try this: it always works for me:

Find a song in another language, or scroll through a friends ipod and look for stuff you dont recognize.

then (if it is in another language, translate it first!!) look at the lyrics and get some deep thoughts on it, and look for the literary details such as emotion, point of view, and the tone. from there it should be pretty easy. try these:

Away ~ Nightwish
Beautiful Days ~ Arashi
Hitohara no hanabira ~ Stereo pony
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:59 pm

thanks ill try that
(i should also try making my poems more cheerful to)
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:06 pm

depressing poems have the most meaning (usually)
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:09 pm

they do my mom would be mad if she knew the type of poems i write
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:51 pm

hahaha! really!? my parents dont care!!
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 5:51 pm

my mom doesnt like deppresing stuff or well... im goth sort of and my mom dosent like that stuff
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:28 pm

HAHAHAHAHAHA! im sooooo sorry! my parents usually encourage me to write like that so i can get all my emotions out on paper instead of my brother...(usually he will piss me off whenim mad and then i will hit him a bit more that hard... xD)
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:36 pm

hahahaha thats funny i hit people when im mad in any way
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:33 pm

todays the day
i get to go
ive let my heart break
but i was still living
and it was still beating
but now thats okay
cuase its time to go

i really dont know what i was thinking when i wrote this i just did
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:04 am

My mother's just like yours shallow grave ^^

My mother gets pissed at me writing emo compositions, poems and quotes. But after she read a few of my poems (with encouraging and depressed in them), she said that the depressed ones were better.

Well, and mari-chan's right! Our sweetest song tells the saddest tale.
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:45 pm

tehe thats a change to me she doesnt even know i write them:(
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:18 am

my life isnt gonna last
ive lived long enough
yu never really loved me
so ill just kill myself
no big deal
you dont care
ive always cut myself
you never knew
to late
now you care
but im already gone
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 7:04 am

but for your age, you write brilliant poems ^^

When I was your age, I didn't even know how to write them. lol
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:00 pm

your only one year older then me???????? right????????

oh and thanks for the coment
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:00 pm

can life get worse
i cut myself
i live in black
my aura is wrong
im going to kill myself soon
help me when my life ends
im just so deppresd
i cant fight it
i slipped up so much
and then....
then i was gone
just like that
now ill finaly live in...
live in peace
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:13 pm

wow these are really good
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:20 pm

thanks cheers Wave
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:17 am

Yeah, I mean... I only started writing them in march this year.
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:19 am

i was doing it for awile but i didnt realize it
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PostSubject: Re: my poems   Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:30 am

That's interesting. I started with making quotes.

Well, do write more. I'm drained and looking for some ideas. XD
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