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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:43 am

They're awesome, I write small not huge, good work cute
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:28 am

I love it sis!
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:51 am

wow that was really good XD
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:15 am

Thanks THey just come to mid and I writ them.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:17 am

thats cool i have to think to write poems XD
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:19 am

This next one I really hope anything to this poem realt to any one because I just wrote it when I was sad about some thing.


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Death is a hard loss.
Death can bring Sadness.
Death can bring many things.
I take it like love or Friendship.
Losing my friends is hard.
Never to see them again.
Only thing is left is Them forever with me.
Forever in my heart.
Forever in my life.
Lossing Family is worse.
But lossing Friends is like lossing family.
Your heart broken forever.
Forever in pain.
Forever in loss of friends or family.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:41 am

wow thats good XD
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:11 am

(NO Named)

The darkness Holds
The dieing fire. The
Sleeping Slumber
fades in death.

I am Fading far
from you. Th darkness
takes me away from
my love ones. Trying to
free my self never works.
I am dieing for my love ones
life.

I can never return to
you. I can never live again.
I die of pain and suffering.

You are my Son forever.
And you left me dieing.
Forever We will never
be.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:29 pm

You know, your actually good or great something nice like that.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:25 am

Thanks like I said they come at random times and it anoys me until I write them down.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:54 pm

I will post more poemes in 5 days or so.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:33 pm

here are two poems I write when I was at dads.

Demon Stole My Heart

Demon You Surround me
with Darkness, worsens
with each minute. Life
you take away is worce but
you need the power. i have
regreted you for takeing
my soul.

Your Darkness surrounds
me wherever I go. Whatever
could have been? I will
never know because your
ways are all that you want
me to know. Demon you stole
my heart.

You have pulled me back
into your world. But yet I
wount let you keep me here
forever. You may of caused
trouble but you can never hold
me here. YOu defencless. How
pity. I will fight you again
to the end. HOpe you will
learn your lesson then.

With one touch my heart
died, with the demons venom
crawling threw my vein, a
heart once made of gold,
a diamond in the rough know ends
in a never ending darkness, its
there and it has stained my heart.
with Dark, dark shadow.

I Have lost this battle,
you have gain strenght more
so. My life has ended for
all entrnty. Take mylife away
as you please. your free to
roam this world. As for me I will
be in a better place.

((Thats one out of two))
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:48 pm

Demon Stole My Soul.

The dark over comes
my lifeless soul a
Neverending darkness.
I feel as though there
will never be any light.

Oh Demon How forever
you will be Danmed. You
hurt my life, you will
hurt many more. Oh Demon
you want to be a leader
well nice try I will never let
you hold me down. Demon
you stole my soul.

You Took what little chance
I thought I had to get throgh
this place. You really think
I'm going to come to you?
I thought I could truxt you
to help me but I was wrong.
You really think I'm Going to
come back to you? NO! I
Will fight you to the end.

Demon You have destroed my
life but you cant destory me
now. Even if you tried. Come on
take my chalenge. You dont
want to die now do you? Well
you shouldent have stole my soul
in the first place. Demon you have
stole my soul.

Demon I am not longer yours
you need to hear me out.
You do not seem to understand
where I am coming from.
Just let me say that I
would die before I would
conform. Because I am
finished with you now
Since you stole my soul.

I will block your every try
to take me over. I will stand
up and defeat you, you will
be left alone. I am Warning
you now, you will not win.
I will give you one
Chance to back down
right now. NO? You dont
want to? Okay here we
go.

Demon you have lost this
battle. Relsae all the souls
you have chapured. I hate to
leave you here in this damed
place. But you Shall be forever
traped here and never relses. You
will die in this place as you stay
here. Never to return to the Earth
Again.

((Theres two out of two. hope you like them))
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:06 am

Calling Forth

I call to you.
I feel the pain of deat all around.
You call to me.
Finding your way.
All I want is freedom.
From my darkness cell.
Free from my death.
Free from the evil encounters.
My soul will be traped.
My body will be freed.
Myself will be forever traped.
I will die if my soul is gone to long.
My Warrior I call forth to you.
Live to free us all.
Live to help others when they need it.
My warrior dont fail me.
Nor others.
Free my soul or I will die.
Do what it takes to get me home.
As I live forever in a new world.


((That wasnt writed down but it poped in my head hope its ok.))


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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:32 pm

Your really good Sak!
I can SO relate to your first poems.Losses are hard and hurtful:(
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:42 pm

Thanks Ann Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:45 pm

Your welcome:)
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:07 pm

NEver Here.

Stop calling me I dont want to talk to you.
You want me again.
No. you always ruin my life.
Your never Here for me.
Your never Here for yourself.
Let it go and Follow my trail.
Save me if you wish.
Your NEver Here!


((Really short poem the shortese on I have. which is fine.))
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:16 pm

True Warrior

A Warrior starong a
breave to protect his
Lovely Goddnes.
A Warrior true and
brave To see the
light to help the
one. As She will
help him when
When he needs it.

Some one Strong,
caring, And true
to his goddness.
Will be the one to
help many more.
Warrior of the East.
Shine as you wish.
But only show the one you
Truely need to sureve.
As you help the young high
Prestes(Sp) To live as long as she can.


((Hehehehehehe random poem yet again. This is kinda rpesting my Warrior Fallen_warrior Very Happy))
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:50 pm

I wish you were with me by my side.
I wish you could be here.
These days will be rember.

For some one I love and care for.
You will be always there for me.


((Ahh My first non dark poem yes I have a boyfriend now and this what came to mind))
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:56 pm

Death and Sadness

Deep thoughts, Dark nights
But what Fill the day Breaks?
Sleep sounds fill happiness to the
Ones of the dead. Happiness only
Comes every so often.

Sometimes when I sit here,
Waist deep in thought
Feeling so lonely
Bad things rush through my head
I don't know what to do
And it makes me sad.

My days are ending short.
As I sit here letting Blood
Drip. I won’t my life end
Like my Family and friends.
I Beg for hope and
Happiness. Even the
One I love tries to make
Me happy. But death
Rushes in my head.

I watch the people
Hunt him to death. Tourchering
Him. I wanted to help but
I stayed and watched.

I made them pay for what
They did. Was I the only one?
Left in this world? Why did they
Run and scream Vampire.

Lord I pray for hope
For an end to my cause.
No one responded. As I Was
Left to die and hope to
See everyone in the after
Life.

I was wrong. Hope responded
To me to someone who I loved
Walked to me and got me slowly
Back to happiness.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:54 pm

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Night is forver.
Day is never here.
I am lost no one to guide
me through the night.

Darkness Srounds
me every day no one
to trun to. Lost forever
what wat to turn.

Lost forever and
never found. I was
destoryed in light but
killed in night.

I still lay there.
Waiting for the
kiss of life.

I lay there for
the love of night.
To raise me.
To let me live
in the night
Forever.


I liked it a lot the last paragraph is my favorite though

your last poem is beautiful but too dark!! that's my opinion anyway.lool keep it up girl



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:14 am

Lol thanks. Sorry I'm a bit of a dark poem writer. lol
I have another one this one is about my life I'm going thorugh right now with two boyfriends.
Title:
Thousand Words can Describe your death

Poem:
Thousand words can describe your death.
Thousand things can be told about your death.
Have your way of life when you know its death to you soon.
Your life is my food for the one person I love.
Your heart, your soul, all of it will belong to him.
Thousand words will kill your life and you will be with no one ever again.
I’m here to end my suffering that leads me to you and all the things you brought with you.
I’m ready to bring an end to my love to you. And go to the one I truly love.
But I know I can’t do that to both of you.
I don’t know who to truly love at all.
There’s a thousand ways to my death that only one maybe both will follow.
I don’t ever want anything to happen to either of you.
To special to lose either of you, my heart belongs to both of you forever.
Come to night to see who’s truly the one who loves me more, or all three of us will die together.
I rather die than make the choice between you both.
I will never have my choice ever. You both mean something to me to lose, let me live here or die with me.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:02 pm

waw! that's a strong one!! i really liked it but i'm sry that you are so confused! never leave the one you love for the one you like.think about it before acting!good job!



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