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Sak-Chan
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:40 pm

Thanks and I'll try. lol. But its kida hard Cause I love them both.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:02 pm

are you sure its love?not attractiveness or something like that?



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:35 pm

YEs! I am sure.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:41 pm

well good luck with that loool



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:34 pm

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Singing like a death bringing me down.
Throwing me down to the depths of death.
Free me from this night.
Free me from this Death.
Sing the song of death or sing your death song.
Your bringing me down with you.
I Will fight until I'm free from you.
Sing the death song or sing my love to you.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:54 pm

i liked it but i loved the last line "Sing the death song or sing my love to you" niceee



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:04 pm

Thanks Thats the mood I'm in atm really.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:46 pm

Love? (Deticated to soon break up....)

I'm falling down you are never there.
All I see is death before me.
Why cant life just be like a fairy tail?
Nevermind that just give me something.
Something to get me out of maddness.
Something to free me from you!
All I feel is love of yours gone from me.
Do you rather want to die?
Or do you want to live?
If you wish to live then leave my site and never speak to me.
My love goes freely.
I just wish for one day someone or something.
To come and set me free of this world of death.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:49 pm

AWWWWE sissy
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:01 pm

Thanks Sis Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:11 pm

You are a very gifted writer and that can bring great things your way Smile Have you submitted any of your poetry to school contests, state ones, etc? Be careful to put your poetry out on the internet though, hun. There are some people out there who will take it for their own if you have no way to claim it as yours.

I love your style of writing... it's different but beautiful.
Keep it up!

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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:44 pm

waaaw it's a good one sissyy!!! i'm sorry you are hurting:( wish i could be there



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:41 pm

Thanks.
@Allyson I never really acully have done that before. I dont think I would though.
@Zmi Thanks sisii and so Do I I wish you were here.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:11 pm

You should! Get out there and show people your talent. There is only a handful of people with ACTUAL talent and you are most definitely in the handful. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:43 am

Aww Thanks girl. I try to any ways. lol
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:12 pm

Let's hope i'll be on when you are and talk about it Sad sry:(



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Fri Sep 23, 2011 2:51 am

Freedom

Come Now and Free your self.
Your nothing to her nothing to any one.
Why try to hurt you when theres some one some where.
Sing with me once more.
Whats to hope for when theres nothing left.
Sing the joys of life with me.
Bring what you know with you and Fill hearts with joy and love.
Hold me tight when you can.
But I know You can trust me with everything you can trust in some one.
Ones love can Help.
Ones love and fill happyness back into the world.
Dont let bitterness take over you.
Fight for Freedom and love.
Now Sing with me once more the freedom of life and Death.
As I am there for you when you never notice until the last min.
Sing the Joys of love with the ones you care for every day..
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Sep 24, 2011 1:37 am

I love it
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:22 pm

Thinking of Someone.

I'm siting here thinking.
Not knowing what to do.
I love only one. But he isnt here.
I will come down with the sickness if I have to.
To be with him.
Why cant I be with him.
Sweet Dreams. Sweet hearts.
Seeing the love around me Breaks me down.
Coming to me would be deadly.
But I am willing to take the risk of death.
I'm willing to Take the blade of dieing for the one I love.

Come now Before the time is done.
There are lives to be saved.
Just let mine sit here and kill me of my sadness.
Theres no stopping love.
But there can be a stop to death.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:31 pm

I love it
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:33 pm

THanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:44 pm

np sis
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:18 am

I sit here waiting for you to come here.
To hold me in your arms.
To hear your voice when you tell me you love me.
Days feel like years.
Hours feel like days.
Cant this get any easier?
I just wish you were at my side Forever.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:25 pm

These are really good Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok))   Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:04 am

thank you.
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