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I Guess They're Good. :]
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They're /Okay/. /:
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:36 am

The lyrics to the song are cute.
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:09 am

Socko. D: You totally killed my hardcoreness with this.. this..
CUTE! That you talk about D:
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:57 am

Traitors and Liars and Bastards, OH MY!


I wouldn't be the first to tell you,
That you are just a jerk.
You like to pretend that the world is yours,
That your stalkers are always alurk.

But all day you're on the phone,
With your new gf, right?
So I doubt your other would have too much time,
To have to make your night.

So if you're going to lie so badly,
Please give me a warning first.
Because I have better things to do,
Than waste my time on dirt.

There was never a time I actually liked you,
Only when my best friend did.
I could never fall for a douche like you,
Cuz you're the one to rid.

You're like mice in the gutters,
Cancer in hearts,
Vegas with no lights,
Or being stuck in the eye with darts.

Actually, Honey, I take that back,
All of it in fact.
Because I'd have all those things done to me,
If it meant people like you were lacked.
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:25 am

I like the rawness of the last poem. Raw write, raw emotions. just raw.
I can feel the anger radiating off the write.
Not very strong diction, but very strong emotions. emotive piece of write.
Sweet~

One suggestion:
'gf' -- 'girlfriend' (gf is understood, but it's not an officially accepted dictionary word)
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:22 am

Raw like meat? ;D
Loads of it. /:
Mhm, thanks(:

Oh, I know. It's kind of an insite, though. It's written in a way that he'd understand. Thanks for your input, though(:
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:27 am

ahh i see.
anyways, i would greatly appreciate if you could return reviews by swinging by my thread to leave a couple of reviews some times.
thank you in advance!
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:05 pm

the flip you meaan!!??
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:32 pm

I MEAN!
Check your profile on the Imagination forum.
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:36 pm

Moonerz. wrote:
Traitors and Liars and Bastards, OH MY!

So if you're going to lie so badly,
Please give me a warning first.
Because I have better things to do,
Than waste my time on dirt.

My favorite Stanza. I like this. It shows, as it was so wonderfully pointed out, raw emotion.
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:33 am

Hahaha, Socko... Oh, how I've missed you(:
Thank you, dearie~
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PostSubject: Re: Moon's Poems Of Sacred Aweshomeness   Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:47 pm

Nice Job
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