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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:27 pm

Get away from me
You're sufficating me
I can't breathe at all
when you're around

Don't touch me
Your touch make me seize
I shudder when you feel me
when you're by my side

Don't talk to me
Your voice makes me melt
I can't speak when you
speak to me

I feel so weird when you're around
But without you I feel nothing at all
So what should I choose?
Numb or Love?




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:48 am

I'm insane
My mind keeps twirling
My emotions are wihrling
I cant control
myself

I feel so crazy
Like the Anesthesia never wore off
Like the whirl is spinning faster
Like a whole new demension

Why is this happening to me?
Now I'm crazed from the insanity
You just want to torture me
'Cause I'm your
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:27 pm

sticks and stones
always break my fragile bones
but words
shoot through my veins
forever and always,
I always get pain

You've abused me
Physically I'm hurt
But Emotionally I'm lost
I don't know what happened
I've already payed the cost

I gave you my heart
And what do I get back?
The beatdown of a lifetime
I was broken at first
but now I'm
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:08 pm

Fly away with me tonight
Let's go away into the moonlight
Away from this nightmare
Away from this world
Away from this darkness
Out of the shadows forever

I wanna live forever with you
And I can't live without you
So let's leave this world
And have a happily forever after

This place is too dark
This place is too screwed up
For anyone to have happiness

So lets Fly
Away From Here
Spread your wings and fly
To a better place
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon May 02, 2011 8:43 am

You got what you deserved
Don't blame anyone but yourself
Pain is what you get back
For taking an innocent life

The life was so young
So fragile
So thin
You knew what would happen
If you messed with it

Yes, you didn't murder
But you aren't inncoent either
If you didn't exist
That life would still be lving

If you weren't here
The scars would dissapear
The rope would untie
And then A life would be spared
I'd still be alive

Go away
So I can finally heal~




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sun May 08, 2011 11:58 am

(I havent gotten comments recently but Its all good, I'll never stop posting lol)
This one is Kinda a mix of a poem and a song, kinda like a lot of my others. I like it when my poems for into songs lol

I'm Burning away
From your memory
Is it that hard to see?
How much you are to me?
But I guess you don't care
What I've got to say
Cuz I'm Fading Away
Fading Away....

Three little words
I should have said
But it's late now
You've already forgotten me

Why Am I still here?
And why are my eyes bloodshot red?
From the tears that I've cried
To the times that I've lied
I always felt for you
But it doesn't matter now

Cause I'm
Fading Away
Fading Away
Disappearing from your mind
But You'll never
Fade from My Heart
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sun May 08, 2011 12:13 pm

Just decided to drop by. Read several.you sure are going through a lot my friend, unlike me. I have yet to experience love.

Love is painful, but you can only really hate a person when you've first loved that person dearly.

Keep writing i'll be back this friday to do an in depth review to as many poems as i can. And i'll greatly appreciate if you could drop by my home site to leave a review or two ( anonymous review has been activated).

P.S: Please DO join my poetry contest! Thank you! (Link's in my signature)

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:33 pm

Frozen Tears
Fall from my frostbitten face
You left me here abandoned
And now I'm gone without a trace

Why did you do it?
I felt everything for you
but you felt nothing for me
I see that now

I see that you hated me
for all the love I've given you
I see that you feel nothing
So you abandoned me
Alone

Alone in the Artic
Seas of Emotions Frozen
Dead forever and always
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Wed Jun 22, 2011 12:13 pm

the last stanza is really powerful. beautifully written.

I hope you're doing well! Don't ever give up and don't ever succumb to grief. If a guy finds you ugly, he needs to check his eyes. If a guy doesn't like you, he doesn't appreciate life. If a guy dumps you, he is homosexual. If a guy clearly states that he hates you, he is a big fat stupid *edit your post and this will go away* (because a guy in the right mind won't do that).

And if he made you cry due to heartache, he doesn't deserve your heart anymore. Very Happy So you won't have to cry for him.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:28 am

As always you have very strong poetry. Youve reallly grown as well. Judging from the last time I read your thread.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:30 am

Thanks both of you~
@ Dreamer thx for saying that =] I love the part in your rant about if i guy dumps me hes homosexual. It made me laugh a lot =D

@Socko yeah my poems got shorter as well as better since I've started writing, as I noticed when i went back and looked through them all (I got really bored cuz of summer ._. lol)

I'll post more poems soon, its kinida late for me to write one, my creative side of my mind is shut off lol




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:40 am

oh yes, just on a side-note. about your reply to socko.
I don't personally think that 'short' means good in poems. Some of the best poems have long, erratic lines, and over 15lines in one stanza. Short is easier to read, yes. But it doesn't show quality. Sometimes the longer the better. Just saying ><
I love to ramble, ignore me >< ><

But you should keep your updates coming! I'm getting bored waitn'~
Well, mostly because I don't have much to do... you see... when I come on here, all I do is look for new poems... and post my own poems. So if I've nothing to read, i get bored.

Keep me happy~ (don't worry, I get influenced by writes, yes, but it makes me happy at the very end of the day)

I hope to see you in my poetry competition at the end of this year again!
I see a lot of potential contest-winning writes here :DD
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:41 pm

Dreamer is right. Have you ever read The Autobiography of my Alter Ego? by Yusef Komunyakaa? Wonderfully long written poetry.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:20 pm

Yeah I know shorter poetry isn't always better, but I was just saying if you look through all my work the better pieces are shorter than my begining ones.
And sorry I haven't posted at all lately, I got hit by a car in July and lost my poetry mojo ._. lol
But I'll probably start writing again soon.




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:47 am

YOU GOT HIT BY A CAR!!??
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:02 am

Yep, I got hit by a car. Did more damage to it then it did to me =P but its like it knoecked the poetic sense out of me ._. But ill think of something soon to write bout. =]




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:48 pm

Oh Dear god! Are you okay at least? Dont worry about your poetry Noxxy Lady
I'm sure once the shock of the accident goes away your muse will come back.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:33 am

Thx KixxY!
A weekend away from my parents got me my poetry mojo back!
Here it goes!

End of the Summer

Summer's Ending
And I haven't seen you in a while
It's been too long
I miss your sunkist smile

So lets go away
to a world with no tomorrow
Lets fly today
To a life without any sorrow
Let's enter a fantasy
Where summer never ends

See the perfect sunsets
Feel the ocean breeze
Taste the sweet of our lips
Feel the love like a disease

So lets soar together
forever and always
to the perfect haven
for just you and me
Where Summer
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:07 am

Sounds like summer dreams. Your mojo truly is back.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:42 am

Well it was. My dogs in the hospital right now so I don't think I'll be able to write for atleast a week, more if she ends up dead ._. I hope she lives though. I can't go through another dog dying D=




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:41 pm

My prayers go out to your dog. Mans best friend is always valued.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:27 am

Thx socko, she's home now and super hyper lol. She has ot take like 4 medications tohugh and im the only one home during the week so i wont be able to right this week much if at all. =/




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:05 am

Was it worth it?
To crush another's soul
To crush another's love
For what you don't deserve?

It's so sad
You scooped so low
On an innocent
Who'd do anything for you

You better feel sorry
You better feel shame
As you ignore me
and try to put out the endless flame
of what you've done

Say you love me
Then take it back
Why can't you just decide?
You're like white and black

So if anyone asks
I will tell them the truth
That you are the reason
that I am and always will be
Dead Inside-
No love, No Soul




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:48 am

Sorry I haven't posted in a while. My brain is dead from all the 8th grade drama this year -.-
I figured I'd post this wonderful poem that i did NOT right, but only those that are deep fans of my favorite band Fall Out Boy would know where its from. Here it goes~.

From day one I talked about getting out
But not forgetting about
How my worst fears are letting out
He said why put a new address
On the same old loneliness
When breathing just passes the time
Until we all just get old and die
Now talking's just a waste of breath
And living's just a waste of death
And why put a new address
On the same old loneliness
And this is you and me
And me and you
Until we've got nothing left

~ Pete Wentz

I'll get back to writing loads more soon so dont worry =] I'll never stop writing <3




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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry of Nox   Sat Dec 31, 2011 2:35 am

Whoo ! Back to poetry writing =] way to end the year and start a new one =D

Dance, Dance
With me 'till the
End of time
Hold my arms
I don't wanna
Lose you
I don't wanna
Let you go
Tonight

Just give me the strength
To live on another day
I need you to stay
By my side
Just hold on
A little bit longer
Because without you
I'll never be stronger

You're my will to live
You're the light inside me
Please don't leave me
Until Time ends

A day without you
Is a day where I am
Dead Inside~.




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