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PostSubject: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:52 pm

The story can be about anything you want. Has to have a Begining Middle and End.

Smile Thank you:)

Begins: August 5
Ends:September 5

I will tell you haw great your stories are during the time Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:18 am

this is part of a little series of stories i wrote for another forum. this is the only one i ever actually posted, but its cute xD

story 1: The Starry Eyed Girl

My name is Moon Dream, and I am a fairy. My talent is providing dreams for the people of the mainland based on their personalities. The dreams vary from person to person, such as a child who is sad dreams of me giving them their deepest wishes, or an adult with inner termoil dreams of a calming sea to soothe their mind. I rarely ever cast nightmares, so I'm going to leave that as is, because I don't like doing it, or talking about it. but you get the point. And this is the story of one of my travels.

It was about 7:00 in the evening in Fairy Commons, and I was getting ready to make my nightly rounds to the mainland. For some reason tonights rounds seemed to give me an icky feeling, like there was something out of balence. I had never felt like this before. It was like I had all my blood turned to tar and my dust turned to stones. It was wearing me down. I felt sick. But as the Common's only dream skilled fairy, I had to do my job.

I had left the Common at precisley 8:03, like I always had. Nothing out of the ordinary. I hadn't noticed anything out of the normal until I had actually reached the mainland. I usually arrived at 8:10, but tonight I arrived a bit late, putting me behind schedule. So I immediatly went to my work. The icky feeling remained with me the entire time. I had delt with it until.....

Until I had reached the end of my rounds and reached on of my favorite houses. This particular family had ways filled me with joy as I left to the Commons. They always gave me the joy of giving peaceful dreams. I entered the house through the daughters room. I should mention that there were a mother with curly brown hair, a father with a cleanly cut beard, and a daughter, a beauiful child who had stars in her eyes. The anticipation to see them lightened my spirits. In the daughters room, there was a dresser, a bed, and my favorite part, a statue of a fairy that I liked to think resembled me. I gazed at the statue and then decided to get to my work. I fluttered to the bed to realize that it was.......empty?! My spirits instantly turned back into cold stones and my blood to tar. It was horrible. Maybe she had just gone to her parents room. Children did that right? But going had only Confirmed my fears. Everyone was gone.

I never had been confronted with something like this. A family gone? No.... Something was wrong. I sat down on the foot of the parents bed and concentrated. Something was pulling me, a force was guiding me toward.....the edge of the mainland? To the woods...? Yes, the woman with the curly hair and the man with the cleanly cut beard were there. But the child with starry eyes? I couldn't feel her. I decided to fly there and investigate.

Once there, I saw the curly haired woman and the man with the cleanly cut beard...crying. after listening to the conversations of various adults, whose minds were so serious that they always rejected my dreams, i discovered that the little girl was lost in the woods. she had been playing and wandered off.

I had felt her spirit alive in me and i knew where she was. what i found nearly made my heart rot black: she was a sight to behold. So scared and alone and cold....I knew I just couldnt leave back to the Commons while she sat here, half dead. She was on the brink of sleep when I found her and I only had to wait a few minutes for her to fall asleep. Or so I thought. She saw my glow and it gave her a sense of home. She had seen me before. I kept her company for about an hour until a ringer in my head had told me she fell asleep. I quickly went to work and gave her the most loving, comforting, dream I could cast, and left her for a minute to find her mother. Curly woman had gone back to her house and slept while the father continued to search for his child. I gave her a dream, no....more like a vision, telling her where her daughter was. More or less. I gave her the trees, the cold weather, and everyother detail as to where the girl was. At that moment she sprung awake. She saw my glow and said "thank you angel" and (I guess) ran to her bearded husband to tell her of her child. At that point I had decided to return to Fairy Commons. My work was done.

The next night I returned to my favorite house and saw everyone in their rightful places. I gave them their dreams and gave the girl a kiss on the cheek. She didn't awake, but smiled.



But in the smile, the stars of here eyes were reflected, and I had never felt happier.
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:23 am

Awwww I loved it. That was beautiful.
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:36 am

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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:38 am

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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:57 am

Of all things I dream about. I dream of flying the most. Who knows why? I mean if you do please tell me. Oh do you not know this soul that haunts your mind? Nice right? Anyway, I'm Tracey. I was only 17, thats when it happened. I became a ghostie.

We need happy thoughts no? I'll tell you of when I came to this horrible realm. . .

I smiled and brushed my hair. I hoped he thought I looked good today. It was our two year anniversary. I just hoped it didn't end like past relationships. I sighed, time to mave on girl! I thought to myself. I shook my head and left my house waiting.

Our date was great! He propossed and said that he loved me! I giggled in my room, twirling and looking at my ring. All of the sudden the lights went out. I stopped and walked over to the light switch trying to turn it back on.

It didn't. I frowned, but then. . . Bang! My front door broke down. I was scared out of my mind. I looked the door and hide under my bed. I heard heavy steps coming up, I was hyperventilating. Then he busted my door down, and looked under the bed. "Hello sweetie." He smiled cruelly. I gasped. "J- Jake?" I said, I thought he died. "You that b!tch." He said pulling me out. I ca- can't say what happened, you know. After that he shot me in the head.

Do you see why? Why I cam here? To keep that from happening to you girl. So take care, I'll keep you safe. And a final warning to you all stay away from them. And I'm here to help you.
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:49 am

That is crazy... I in a good way. I thought it was great.
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:06 am

Ehh, it was fun. ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 12:52 am

~The Past Lives of James Cooper~

I woke up from a long sleep. I rubbed my eyes and looked around. Where the heck am I?

I looked at myself. I was put into a stray jacket and metal banded me to a table. I couldnt move. I could barely breathe.

Right then, a man in a white jacket came over to me with a huge needle. "I'm sorry we have to do this to you..."He aimed the needle at the top of my head.

All of sudden. i felt the strangth of 10 men, i busted out of my stray jacket and ripped the matal bands from around me. The man tried to stop me, but i threw him against the wall and ran.

I heard him call a number, so i knew i did not have much time. As i ran, ghost and figures of peaple i have never met surrounded me, pointing me to the right direction. I ignore the fact that they were ghosts and kept running.

Security followed me and began shooting with several machine guns. I somehow dodge every bullet. Then i was backed into a corner.

They all aimed for me. Then, I saw my life flash before my eyes, But it wasnt just mine, it was others. Then i realzed it was the ghosts' pasts.

I didnt hear the bullets rain around me. I did not get a final word in my life.


I woke up from a long sleep and rubbed my eyes. There was a girl about 15 dressed in all white standing in front of me.

I looked around.

"Welcome James Cooper. Welcome to the world of The Past Lives." She began walking down a flight of black stairs, and without any self control, i followed her. To a life of haunting and ruining the new lives.




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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:22 pm

That was really cool Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:03 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:23 pm

I'm glad.
Its not really popular though
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:26 pm

I woke up acrimoniously sea waves had hit my foot. I liked it, since my childhood I used to like. But the sea was so foreign to me. The most beautiful shade of blue that belonged to the sea. My mind is only recently came to my head. Suddenly jumped to his feet. I was scared, I was nervous. I'm doing here is it? I've been here how long? I do not know.

Endless, boundless sea ... I want to scream, but I'm afraid. When I turn my back I encountered was frightening as well as beautiful scenery. My attention was the height of the tree. Did I ever seen a tree like that before, I wonder? I do not think so. Because it is impossible to forget something like a tree. A long, long, wide leaves and fruit. I do not remember seeing before, this fruit.

I was scared, I was excited, I was concerned. But curiosity was eating me up inside. If as fear not go too deep into the forest would have provided. I started walking slowly. I was doing here? Still did not know. I would be careful not to fall out. Where there were branches and leaves. I was under the leaves of the animals might be. I was walking by holding on to trees. Pause when you see where I've fallen coconuts. I was very much likely to remain open.Carefully to get the coconut tree, went to. Bilmesemde been exactly a coconut was certain to help me. I got bent. My attention was next to the coconut leaf. Was very large. I wanted to have tingling in my hands if I'm surrounded. The brown face in my hands when I saw the back of the leaf. It was very interesting. Green on one side and a brown face. Coconut leaf in my hand and put my backpack on my bag when I saw the water. I really appreciate it.Though not at the moment I knew she would need in the wee small hours. When the sound of my backpack zipper pulls thought it was creepy. I was standing exactly on top of that tree, I saw a bird. What was so beautiful. Long beak, has a yellow color. It was nice to be nice, but it could be predatory. I decided to get away with this idea. I wonder Did he see me?
I did not know and had to be silent to avoid. Çalışsamda had seen me to go away quietly. Look at me, but I sensed that I continue to walk. I went into the forest. Gidiyordum.Şu from what i know what to do now that all I wanted was to move away from the bird. Than myself, ''No!''.I said. What am I doing? What in the woods looking for?

I got a chill. I started to run. I was running like crazy. I was trying to avoid hitting the trees. ''Oh. Damn.''I said. Fallen into place. I had been crumbs leaves above my head. And my feet hurt worse. I was scared, I was very scared. I was my own daughter.'' I did not wear pants.Why?''.Was also in pain.I opened my backpack and took the water. I needed to drink water. I was sweating, I was out of breath. The water was good. Did not fall until you feel thirsty. After closing my backpack, I got up slowly. Smile on my face when I woke up to the moon where the sun would leave.. Should have access to the beach from the air well before dark. I started running again. But I was more careful this time.The air was getting the decision. I was getting cold. My skin is damp wind was blowing ragged cats and dogs. I heard a voice that was almost to the beach. Evidently, the sound of a person that I was coming back. I've even faster. I could not breathe anymore. As for the recent strength of my voice again, I kept running. Yes, now I've got to the beach. Leave the moon where the sun had completely disappeared. Had a normal situation under the moonlight by the sea and I could find to be pleasant.

And now I know, I opened and I was afraid I was cold.








This is my story. My english is not good enough for the translation program, I use (:
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Mon Aug 30, 2010 11:41 pm

The translation was fine. lol
I loved the story.
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:31 am

Thanks .)
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:30 pm

So I loved every bodies stories. They were all amazing.
The winner is... Mari-Chan
Congradulations Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Best Short Story ((Ended!))   Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:38 pm

Kyaaaaan~! Arigatou :3
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