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| Do you like my poems/songs? | | Yes | | 90% | [ 9 ] | | No | | 0% | [ 0 ] | | Maybe | | 10% | [ 1 ] |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:49 pm | |
| I haven't created a name for this song yet but these are the words
Air you are soft and cold Fire you will burn are soul Water you calm and bring us chear Earth you bring us everything dear Spirit you are sweat and playful All of you join on this blessed chear Sing together oh great elements Play with me and please bring us peace Now I ask last of all defeat the darkness that haunts us all.
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Age: 17 Posts: 8900 Location: Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date: 2009-07-12
Character sheetName: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:04 pm | |
| ^ thats really good! it really represents the elements well! keep it up! ~Mari-Chan <3 |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:53 pm | |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:10 am | |
| Come to me Air so sweet and free Come to me Fire that brings the heat Come to me Water so clear and blue Come to me Earth both old and new Come to me Spirit so brave and strong Come to me Elements sing my song Destroy the Darkness that lyes in are hearts Let light shine so bright on this glorious kind of night Now roam free all of you now that this song is finaly through
Please tell me what you think of this songs words |
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 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:49 am | |
| it has a deep meaning and i love them they could actually be some really good metal songs love u forever |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:01 pm | |
| HATE YOU NOW AND FOREVER
You said you would always be mine Now you say that I am not right You killed my heat and now it is dark I will never be the same never in the night At night I will wish for you to be near Now I woundered why I loved you and held you dear I never want you near me again or to see you in my head but I still love you for heavens know why just stay away and keep clear |
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Age: 17 Posts: 60 Location: United States Join date: 2009-08-18
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:21 pm | |
| there all really good. cant wait to see more. |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:50 am | |
| Come back to me
you took off without a word you broke away with my soul now my love has died and my passion has died to I found you but you do not return why will you not return please return my love and soul I need you to live on so return to me my heart and soul return and let me live again |
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Age: 19 Posts: 2072 Join date: 2009-07-22
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:28 pm | |
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Age: 17 Posts: 8900 Location: Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date: 2009-07-12
Character sheetName: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:08 pm | |
| these are all so ardently written...bravo!! ~Mari-chan <3 |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:08 pm | |
| Love
My heart came back because of you My heart is strong now for you to I love you now that I know your near Be my love and please stay near Love me for me and not my light Be my hun for now on you are my light |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:29 pm | |
| Hurt
You hurt me now You hurt me then Now you say lets be friends You brake my heart You tell me lies Now again you say goodbye I missed you then I miss you now But now I may take a bow For I promise Now that I see You are dead to me I see you day in and day out But now I say I hate you now You hurt me then You hurt me now So I at last take my final bow |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:23 pm | |
| ChildHood
I sit and watch the sun go by never saying hello I sit and watch the moon rise as my heart beats so slow I sit and wounder why I live when I wish to die Then I see the moon appear and think of a song I think I see what life is about only to see I am wrong But I then wake up in the night to a childhood song Staring out my window seeing my friends face I let the tears fall knowing you'll never come back and sing our childhood song I know you are my childhood friend but no matter what I see You are and always be only a precious memory
))Please tell me what you think(( |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Wed Apr 21, 2010 12:13 pm | |
| The Death of my Life
My Life is gone My Life is bare My Life is full of dispear
I see my life no longer here I see my life no longer there I see my life as nothing more then a dark piece of dispear
My life is now over My life now is dead My life is now cut in two But now my life is gone for good |
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Age: 19 Posts: 18158 Location: In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date: 2009-07-19
 | Subject: Re: Crystal Rose's Songs/Poems Mon May 10, 2010 10:35 am | |
| I see you
I see you when I close my eyes I see you when I sleep When I think about one thing it goes straight to you I see what you mean to me You see you are who I want I want to see you I want to hold you You are the one I love I hope you see me I hope you hold me dear I will remember you I will see you till the day I die
))please tell me what you guys think(( |
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