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PostSubject: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 18, 2010 1:27 pm


Chapter 1: The Day Before
Sitting in silence, Charlie Kell, was thinking about how she wished her life was. She hated being passed off as Ms. Perfect. She wished her life was more exciting, like the stuff she read in her books, starts off as a normal girl, meets the boy of her dreams, he turns into some type of creature, and there is nothing but action from then on out. Nothing is ever boring.
Charlie was thinking maybe something will happen at her new school, something exciting. She was really nervous, maybe the people won't like her. What if she doesn't make any friends? What if she is the weird lonely girl that everyone makes fun of and no one talks to? Charlie couldn't live out her high school career like that.
"Charlie, come down here and set the table." Her mother, Teresa, yelled from the kitchen.
"Coming." Charlie yelled back, getting up and walking downstairs. Entering the kitchen she saw her mothers hour glass figure at the stove, she took a deep breath, "Mom... I can't go to school tomorrow."
Her mother stopped what she was doing and turned around. "I knew this was coming." She said, "And why not?" She asked in her strictest mom voice.
"I'm sick." Charlie gave the worst fake cough ever and her mom just looked at her. "What? I am. I can feel the disease infesting my body."
Turning back to the stove her mother just said, "Your going to be fine tomorrow. I promise you will make lots of friends, but no boyfriends." she said sending her a dark look.
"Oh yeah, way to boost my self-esteem, mom." Charlie said sarcastically, "I'm okay enough to make friends, but not cute enough to have a boyfriend." She grabbed the plates and started to set the table.
"Young lady, you know that is not what I meant. Its just that, you are only sixteen and you are not allowed to have a boyfriend yet." She said, not looking at Charlie.
"Uh-huh!" she said not getting back into that conversation with her parents. Her friends laughed at her because she didn't have a boyfriend, she never said it was because she wasn't allowed, but that she was waiting for the perfect one to come along. They didn't believe her, but she didn't care... a lot.
Once Charlie finished setting the table, dinner was ready. Her family never really talkedwhile they ate, it was really just an awkward silence. She finished eating and asked to be excused, "Thats fine, but Charlie don't stay up to late, don't want to be tired on your first day." Her mother said. Before she left the dinning room, Charlie said "Okay." Over her shoulder and then headed upstairs.

It was only 7:10 p.m and there was really nothing to do, her parents wounldn't let her have a TV in her bedroom, They said it would corrupt her. But thankfully she broke them and they bought her an i-pod. She put in her headphones and layed down on her bed, again, just her and her thoughts. Thinking about all the way her day could go wrong tomorrow, she decided to distract herself and grab a book. The latest book she was reading was Betrayed by P.C and Kristen Cast, she loved it. She read until she got tired and got into her monkey pajama pants and tank top. Charlie layed down in her bed and instantly fell asleep.


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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:52 pm

i like it so far. write moree lol
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:57 am

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:56 pm

you better i like this story
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sat Oct 23, 2010 2:37 pm

Chapter 2: First Day

Charlie woke up to the sound of her obnoxious alarm clock, she threw it on the floor and rolled over to go back to sleep. Right then her mother walked in, "Honey, get up. You have to get ready."
"No!" Charlie said and pulled the covers over head.
Her mother laughed and walked over to the bed, "Come on." She said pulling the covers off her.
"Ugh." Charlie said patting at the bed serching for the blanket. "Fine." She said sitting up and glaring at her mother.
"Good morning starshine, the earth says hello." She laughed and walked out.
Charlie got out of bed, sluggishly, and went to take a shower. When she got out, she tried on fourteen different outfits before deciding to go with the first one she tried on: a black plain T-shirt, and her favorite pair of jeans, shee didn't really care about her under garmets, so she went with her purple lace bra and yellow thong. She got dressed and walked into the bathroom, she turned and looked at herself in the mirror, then she did what most girls did when they saw their reflection... she started to pin point the things she wanted to change. Charlie didn't like her soft blonde curls, or that she looked like a cliche, blonde hair blue eyes. She wanted to darken her hair color to a medium brown, like her fathers, but she couldn't because her mom wouldn't let her, just because she liked it.
Finished tamine her hair and putting on her makeup, she walked downstairs and into the kitchen. Her dad, Mike, was sitting at the table, like usual, reading the paper. Her mother, being the perfect little house wife that she is, was making a "healthy" breakfast. A bowl of cereal, her mother liked to cook, but not in the morning.
"Good morning." She said kissing both her parents on the cheeks and sitting down at the table.
"Good morning, love. Whats wrong?" Her dad asked.
"First day of school gitters." She replied.
"Listen, I know we go over this all the time, but, No boys."
" I know, dad." Charlie said rolling her eyes.
"Yeah, well your sixteen and I ain't raisin' no babies." He said and went back to his reading his paper. More silence in the Kell household, Charlie thought.
She finished her breakfast and gave her bowl to her mother, who was already doing the dishes. Charlie looked at the clock and she had to leave, she still had to stop at the office to get all her papers. She yelled bye to her parents and grabbed her keys to her green, Ford F-150. Charlie may be just a girly girl but she loved her truck.
Charlie pulled into the school parking lot and she didn't move for a minute, it was the first day of a new school and she was a little scarred. Well more than a little. She took a deep breath and decided to get it over with, she climbed out of the truck and walked into the office. She looked around to see where to go.
"You lost honey?" The women behind the desk asked.
"Um... I am Charlie Kell, I'm new." She said.
"Oh." The women said digging throught her desk and pulling out a manilla folder. "Yes here you go, these are all the papers you need. Are you going to drive to school?"
"Yeah. I'm allowed right?"
"Of course." More digging through her desk, "Just fill this out and turn it in with those papers and we will give you a parking permit. Do you need someone to escort you around school?"
"No thank you... I think I will be able to get around fine." Charlie smiled at the women and started to flip through the papers. She found her schedual and looked at it, knowing this year was going to be easy, she had already taken most of the classes.
Calculus with Ms. Smith, room 802
Physical Education with Mr. Hodge
Biology with Mrs. Nelson, room 610
World History, Mr. Rick, 410
British Literature, Mrs. Fairchild, 511


Charlie found the number and combination to her locker, after a bit of looking she finally found it. She tried the combination, it didn't work so she tried again... and again. She started to get really mad, "Open!" She said starting to hit the locker. Then she heard a deep chuckle behind her and she spun around mad, but froze. The guy behind her had shaggy black hair, he was tall, green eyes, and dressed all in black. She never really found that dark goth look hot, but He was hott.
"Thank you." He laughed.
"Oh my goodness. Did I say that outloud?" He nodded and smiled.
"Need help?" He said gestuing to the locker. All Charlie could do was nod. He walked up so close that she could feel the heat coming from his body. She swallowed and looked at him. He plucked the combination out of her hand and reached over her and opened the locker on the first try. He handed her back the combination and said, "See you around." then walked away before Charlie could say thank you. If she could because all she could really do was stare.

Who is that?
Charlie asked herself. She was really determined to find out.


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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sat Oct 23, 2010 3:52 pm

Nice!
Keep writing Smile
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sat Oct 23, 2010 3:58 pm

Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:30 pm

I like it when will you write more?
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:35 pm

I have some of chapter 3 but not all of it.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:56 pm

I will probably have it next time.
I write it in school
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Tue Oct 26, 2010 10:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Thu Oct 28, 2010 9:00 pm

Smile Thanks I haven't had much time to write it. Sad
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:35 am

Chapter two reminds me a little of Harry Potter. XD (Okay, I'm a Harry Potter addict.)

Anyway, this is a good beginning for your story.

Just an afterthought though... The length of your chapters are a little short... Maybe you could add a little more details into the chapters to make them longer?

I'm looking forward to more (:
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Fri Oct 29, 2010 4:40 pm

I am going to add more to them lol I was writing it and I couldn't remember what I wrote word for word so I just started to write.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:42 am

Chapter 3: Fast Enemies
Charlie bent down to put the books in her locker, when a shadow came over her, she looked up and saw a girl. She was in heels, perfect clothes, perfect make-up, straight brunette hair, her eyes were hiding behind sunglasses. By her stance she had something to say, and Charlie knew it wasn't going to be nice.
"Hi?" Charlie said not really knowing what else to say.
"Stay away from Nate." She told Charlie, angry.
"I'm sorry, Who?" Having no clue who Nate was Charlie went back to taking her books out of her back pack.
"The guy you were just talking to, back off he is mine." She said crossing her arms.
"And you would be?" Charlie stood up and put everything in her locker, knowing that she wasn't going to opening it later without help. She has always had issues with lockers, they were satens creation, only wanted to open when they felt like it.
"Clarissa More." She said, obviously annoyed that she didn't already know. At that moment Charlie knew that this was the queen bee of the school.
"Well then I am sorry for talking to your boyfriend."
"Oh he isn't my boyfriend. Yet."
Charlie looked at her, was she really stacking claim on something she didn't already have? "What are you guys on like a break or something? You guys don't want to go out with each other yet or something?"
"No exactly... he doesn't know it, but we are suppose to be together. He is poopular... I'm popular. It is just high school 101." She said, but Charlie could tell she was distressed.
"Well then how I look at it, you have no claim yet. So..." Charlie grabbed her schedual and looked at it to find out where the class was, then she looked at the map she got of the school.
Clarissa stepped up to Charlie and wripped the paper out of her hands. "You don't want to be on my badside little girl, you really don't know who you are messing with."
Charlie clearly wasn't a bad person, but there was just something about this girl that made her mad. The popular girls always made her mad, thinking they were better than everyone, well all the one she had met were anyway. "Clearly I am messing with a desperate witch with a capital B." Chalie snatched her schedual back, "And did anyone ever tell you that it is not nice to snatch. Where are you manners?" She closed her locker and walked away to go find her class, leaving Clarissa to stand there by herself, after being told off.
Charlie had never done that to anyone, she was a nice person. What was she thinking? She knew this was going to come back to bite her, the new girl with no friends telling off, probably the most popular girl in school and it was all that guy, Nate's fault. If it weren't for him she would never had met his stalker and everything would be fine. This was going to be a long year, Charlie just knew it.
Sighing she finally found her classroom, she walked in and went up the teacher and said that she was new.
"If you can find a seat when the whole class is here, you are more than welcome to sit in that seat."
"Thank you." Charlie said and waited, she watched the door waiting for class to start so that she could put her stuff down. The bell rang and she looked around for a seat there were two in the back, one next to a well dressed boy with his notebook already open, and the other next to a kid already asleep. Charlie thought that the well dressed kid would better benefit her, so she sat there. When she sat down she put her books on the floor and pulled out her notebook and a pen.
"Hi... I'm Daniel." I kid said to her. "Are you knew? Where did you transfer from?" He said just shooting questions at her. She smiled.
"I'm Charlie." She said trying to stop the questions. "I came from a school out west." She said. "Nice to meet you. She said reaching her hand out for him to shake it.
He took her hand, then dropped it. "Are you smart? Becasuse it would really be nice to have a real conversation with someone." He asked.
"You ask strange questions. what if I was crazy?" Charlie asked joking around.
"Well then we would fit right in together." He leaned into whisper to her "I hear things... seriously. I am a diagnosed scisophrenic." He said laughing. "I don't have many friends, people think I am weird." He said.
"Well don't worry, I'll be your friend. And FYI, I think I just picked a fight with the top dog." Charlie said. She knew today was going to go bad and it had. The second bell rang and the teacher told the class that Charlie was knew. "Come up here and say something." Charlie nodded and got up and headed up front, She got halfway down the crowded isle and someone tripped her. She looked up and saw the kid Nate and glared at him. The whole class errupted in laughter, Nate looked at her and one of his friends turned into a three year old and sang. "I see london, I see france, I see the new girls underpants." And everyone started to laugh even harder.

Charlie stood up and turned back to her seat not wanting to talk in front of the class anymore. "Aw come on hun, say a few words." Nate said. With a smirk. She shook her head and sat down, She looked at Daniel and he mouthed @ss holes. She smiled and nodded. The teacher getting that Charlie wasn't going to speak she sat there and listened, but didn't listent to the snappy remarks about the new girl falling. She slumped in her seat and covered her face with her hands. All Charlie knew was that the day couldn't get any worse.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:52 am

Changed the first and second chapter a little.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:34 pm

Charlie walked to lunch, it was her first day and she had already mad a fool of herself, made an enemy and a friend. Atleast one good thing has come out of it. She walked into the lunch room and she saw Daniel sitting by himself, "Is it okay if I sit with you?" She asked him.
"Of course, lovely." He said, pushing out her chair with his foot. "Okay so tell me what happened between to and the queen b*tch." he asked curiously.
"Well... the guy Nate opened my locker for me and then she got all up in my business." I said doing a neck roll. "And I kinda called her a witch with a capital B, and I said that she was desperate. I realised she is stalking Nate, and that apparently they are destined to be together. But I thought that girls like her, you know preppy and stuff, went out with the jocks, not the emo boys." She said looking at him for some tyoe of clarity.
"Oh girl, things have changed." he said mocking her and shaking his head. "Clarrisa has had a thing for him since forever, and when he saved her from getting beat up by her ex boyfriend she has been infatuated with him ever sense. Puppy love." He said and pointed to them. "Look, she is attracted to him like a moth to a flame. Its a little sad."
"Well, by the looks of it he doesn't do anything to stop the attention." She said watching them, she clung to Nate's arm and she looked like she was whispering things in his ear. Charlie wanted to know what she was saying to him and it made her a little jealous, she knew she shouldn't be because he tripped her infront of the whole class, but earlier he was really nice. There was something about Nate that got Charlie's blood boiling in both anger and need, of course, she was like everyother girl falling for the cool guy, but Charlie wasn't dealing with the baggage of being attacked by Clarissa for even looking at him.
Charlie turned back to Daniel, "He keeps refusing to date her, he says she is not his type." He said flipping through his notebook. "He says being the key word. I think they have been secretly dating, those weird flings." He didn't look up.
"What is that?" She said motioning to his notebook, she was curious and she didn't want to talk about Nate and Clarrissa anymore.
"My journal of ideas, no you can't see. They won't like it." He said. Charlie did elaborate because she wasn't really sure if she wanted to know who they were. She knew this was one to those friendships, that was don't ask don't tell. "Okay." Was all she said and then they just talked about each other, the normal stuff for new friends. She found out he was gay and he found out that she was afraid of rejection. The bell rang and Charlie sat through the next two classes like it was nothing. When the day finally ended she went to her locker and Nate was there.
"Excuse me." She said because he was leaning on her locker. "Your on my locker." She said and he just kept looking at her. Charlie rolled her eyes and started to walk away.
"Wait." He said grabbing her wrist before she could walk away. "I want to say I'm sorry." Charlie turned to look at him and he looked sincere about his apology.
"You should be." She told him and went back to her locker and she looked at the combination and she tried to open it. She was just glad that it worked this time, so that she didn't have to look like a damsile in distress when she was trying to ignore him.
"I wanted to know if you wanted to go out?" He asked sheepishly.
"No." she told him and closed her locker and started to walk towards the bus.
"Let me give you a ride home. I have a 08' Mustang GT." Charlie could tell her wanted something.
"Is that suppose to impress me?"
"Well... it does most girls." Atleast he was being honest. Charlie thought.
"Why don't you go give Clarrisa a ride? I bet she will be more than will." she said "I have to go or I will miss my bus." Charlie said and walked away from him. Charlie didn't know why but that had to be the hardest thing she has ever done.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:04 pm

Charlie hurried up and ran to her truck, she had to lie to him because if she told him she had already driven to school then he would have insisted she stay and talk or worse… he walk her to her vehicle. Her resolve would have been smashed. First she had to go the office and hand in some of her papers. When she got there the same women from earlier was still at her desk, she looked up. “Hello, Sweetie. How was your first day?”
“I think it could have gone better.” She said and handed in her paper for her parking permit and she got parking spot 45. Charlie was just glad that it was close to the door, she didn’t want to have to walk far just in case it rained. “Thank you. See you tomorrow.” Charlie said and waved to the women. She went to her truck and searched for her keys.
“I thought you said you had to catch a bus.” Charlie jumped and dropped her books. “I’m sorry.” Nate said when she turned around. She bent down to get her books, but he stopped her “Let me.” He smiled and grabbed her books and put them on the bed of her truck. “So you’re a truck girl, that’s why you weren’t impressed with my mustang.” He looked at her with a raised eyebrow.
“Why do you keep bothering me?” She asked him. “I mean there are probably other girls out there that you can bother.” She told him and turned back to her door.
“That’s the thing. All the girls want me. But you don’t.”
“Well someone has a big ego.” She said sarcastically. “I have to get home, papers to fill out things to do.” She got her door open and climbed in. “I’m sorry, but your just not my type.” She said and closed her door, and he turned to walk away. Charlie knew that she lied to herself. But she wasn’t allowed to date and she would rather report that she made a friend instead a boyfriend. Her parents would flip if she said that. She turned on the music, just to escape her own thoughts.
She pulled into her driveway and her mother was of course home. She walked to the door and opened it. “Mom? I’m home.” She yelled and her mother told her to come to the kitchen.
“How was it?” Her mother asked “Did you make any friends?”
“It could have been better.” She said, “Yeah, his name is Daniel and he is cool.” She told her mom, and she gave Charlie a look that she knew all too well. It was the what-have-we-told-you-about-boys look. “Mom don’t fret he is gay.” She rolled her eyes.
“Well today seemed like fun.” Her mother said and turned back to the counter, she was starting to cook dinner so that it was ready at 6:30 like she did every day.
Charlie ran to her room and went over the papers that she had to fill out, her parents hated filling out papers so they just signed then and she filled them out. She finished the papers and decided to take a nap and before she fell asleep she started to think about Nate, then she fell asleep.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:29 pm

i really like it! lol keep writing
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Mon Nov 29, 2010 7:23 pm

lol thank you.
I have to think if more.
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PostSubject: Re: UnExpected (Chapter 1-???)   Fri Dec 17, 2010 3:05 am

Love it!!!
Please write more
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