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PostSubject: My poems (There bad)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:11 pm





FAKE!
RAGE!
INNOCENT??
EXIST
NOOO!
DEATH
SLAUGHTER


I WISH I COULD HAVE BELIEVED THEM, BUT
NOW THEY ARE ALL DEAD AND I HAVE ONLY THE SENT OF THERE BLOODS ON MY HANDS.
I WISH HE COULD HAVE TOOK ME INSTEAD OF THEM, HE WANTED ME TO FEEL PAIN.
I DONT. I FEEL LIKE ITS TIME TO STAND UP TO HIM AND SHOW HIM HE ISNT THE CONTROLER OF WHO LIVES OR DIES.
I AM.
IF I KILL HIM THEY WILL BE ALIVE ONCE MORE.
SO ASK YOURSELFS ARE YOU THE PROTECTER, OR THE VICTIM


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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:23 pm

heres another one its my signature but i like it still havent come up with a title.

DEATH IS PEACEFULL AND QUIET, MAYBE EVEN SILENT.
IT SWEEPS YOU AWAY, LIKE ALL YOUR LIFE WAS A MEMORY.
PEOPLE ESCAPE TO DEATH BECAUSE OF ITS ISOLATION. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IT FEELS LIKE TO BE DEAD. BUT PEOPLE SAY I HAVE TO MANY PEOPLE THAT WOULD MISS ME. I DONT BELIEVE IT SO MUCH. BUT MAYBE THERE RIGHT. TELL ME IS THERE??
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:59 pm

the breeze blows my hair twords the burning flames
as then i gazed to the moon and cry
out why i am your enemy not them i should die not them i felt my teeth change from human to wolf,
i had became the pained wolf to defend the death and the blood fire,
for i caused this not her or him me the one,
i Have became marked
but i will never go to the house of night,
not as long as i am wolf protecter of ones who still now how to love.
and
have there humanities.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:22 pm

as i walk down to isle with my candle,
it is my life. and its my soul
if i blow it out i will die
not buried dead but with no
soul, or
love.
as i walk down the isle
i put my candle down and with take some holy water
and wet the sides of the cadle.
im about to blow it out to love
to my soul
and to you.. but you burst through the doors
but are you to late it all goes dark and
im finally a creature of hell or did you save me
and give me my humanity
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:29 pm

yea there ameture, but hay its what i got so....
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:26 pm

out they come 2 by 2
they find there prey and drain them dry
will i stop this or will i become this.
to end this will i die for them people i dont know
burn in hell for something i didnt do
will i ?
yes i will because its the truth and i wouldnt die just yet.
because i will be reborn im the protecter of the moon and the blood of the fires of souls and humanity
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:07 pm

as they drain my blood, for i am not human
nor am i a malker of the night, i am the walker of the moon
and i believe that i wont survive.
for i have poisened my blood.
i may die but so shall they those ceatures of the night.
not the ones that dont destroy innocent souls
but the one that destroy there own humanity
it was how it was written
and so shall it be.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:13 pm

that last one is good, the others aren't that much.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:19 pm

yea but i like the first 2
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:18 am

Promises i broken
lies i have told
if i could change it i would
to see all of you agian
but im trapped in this forever blood craze
i wish i could stop it but i cant
i miss feeling the sun on my face
i miss laughing and smiling
now im just a souless creature
i kill to feed, and leave them to die
i have non fate, i have no humanity
im a predator, and you are my prey
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PostSubject: tough time   Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:48 pm

some of these are poems I already had and found or I just wrote these.

The Note
Tears fall one by one as I read your note saying
I love you so much. but I love her more
I hope we will still be friends.
But thats a lie we wont be friends.
We wont speak to eachother, we might
see eachother someday, but I will never know
if you even loved me at all
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:18 pm

thats a good poem
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:53 pm

thanks I just found that one
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Sat Jan 01, 2011 4:34 am

Truth I hide
I lied, I really did like him
I just didnt want people to know,
I lied and lied until I broke down.
I did love him, his smile, his frown.
It hurt to look at him and not say I love you or Hug him.
I guess its just the truth I hide
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:18 pm

These are good:)
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:54 pm

Smile with me as we walk
A true smile, one that I can smile with
You make me smile, more then I ever had
And its a good thing. A very good thing.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:42 pm

Np and this one i like:)
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:05 pm

lol thanks
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:52 am

your really goood these poems are really good.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:14 am

Thanks but they are okay
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:19 am

no they are really good.
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:20 am

If you say so
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:23 am

i dont say i know they are really good
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PostSubject: Re: My poems (There bad)   Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:38 am

Well thanks
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