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Sak-Chan
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PostSubject: The Heart's Never Alone    Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:02 am

The story The Heart's Never Alone can be found

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ohh keep going.
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:35 am

i like it write more
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Sun Oct 24, 2010 10:22 am

Nice!
Keep writing Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:30 pm

I like it
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:12 am

Keep writing! Because you'll get it from me if you stop /cracks knuckles/

I like this story because it stands out among all the others I've read. I noticed the used of a wider range of vocab. The idea of recalling, and also the use of different formating to make the story more interesting. Good!
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:26 pm

i like it
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PostSubject: The Heart's Never Alone   Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:27 am

Okay so it goes like this
Jason=Air
Chris=Fire
Carrisa=Earth
And The Main Character Who's Name I Cannot Remember=Water
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PostSubject: Re: The Heart's Never Alone    Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:09 pm

Is anyone reading my story cause if not i'm going to stop writing cause it would be kinda pointless to keep on writing
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