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PostSubject: Beth's diary   Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:08 am

im not sure if short storys count in here but here is a finnished short story of mine .


(page 1)

Steeve walked back into their old house after the funeral,
this was the first time he had been in here since she died.
He didn't know if he would be able to handle it.
He walked by the counter and put down his keys on the counter were a note.
"This couldn't have been here before the cops would have told me
if there was a note for me if there was one"
he said to himself as he sat down and read.
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Last entry: august 1st 2010

Dear jannet,

Everything is better now I have one real last words of good bye to you and steeve,
oh jannet steeve will get this entry and if he is a good boy
he will put it where it is supposed to be in you. Please accept this entry as part of you because I have nowhere else for it to go.
STEEVE! STOP READING THIS NOW! In the closet there is a diary go in there and put this where the torn out page is and read it after you read everything else.


Steeve got up and looked in the closet with tears running down his cheeks he saw that there was indeed a diary hidden away in the closet.
He picked it up and walked to their bedroom and sat down and read.



(page 2)

Dear Jannet,

Whoever is reading this now is probably wondering why I am calling my Diary Jannet.
Well the simple reason is that I don't know.
I have been naming my Diaries since I was 5.
I am now 30 a pretty nice age don't you think?

October 21st 2009

Okay well to start this wonderful art piece off! My name is Beth I am 30
and I just got a Boyfriend!
I finished Jess last week and I thought I would start you Jannet
so you better feel Proud to be such a big part of my life!
(if not it's okay I will forgive you jannet ,
just like I forgave Hope for falling into the river....
that is one part of my life I will never get back I cried for like one whole week!)
Well back on track! His name is Steeve and he is so amazing!
He is 25 I know he is a bit young for me.
I am hoping no one will call me a cougar behind my back.
I am only 5 years older than him no big deal right?
Well I so have to tell you about him!
He is tall I think at least six foot two he had brown hair and very cute dimples.
He is thin but strong. (He picked me up when we met) he is VERY CUTE! EEEEEKKKKKKK!
And yes Jannet you will find out that I act like a teenager when I write and the reason is well because I can. =)






Jannet we have only been dating for like about a month now
But I think and well I think I love him already aunt that just so wonderful!?
Well I will write in you latter jannet ill catch you in a few weeks!
(Oh by the way I might add poems to you if I don't put real entrees in
I hope you love them just like I do jannet!)

LOVE BETH! <3



(page 3)



(Date not dated)

Here is a poem for you jannet!
Falling angels

Walking on the clouds,
letting my wings expand,
feeling them catch the wind,
I jump off of the clouds and fly to the earth,
welcoming the earth's embrace,
I touch my foot to the ground,
and say good bye to my heavenly wings forever,
so I can be with my lover,
he is my heaven,
he is my wings,
he is the wind that lifts me up,
and lets me fly once more.

November 7th 2009
Dear Jannet,
Its Beth again I and Steeve just got back from a movie party.
It was bump in the night themed!
It was pretty fun I got to cuddle with Steeve on the couch for a while.
Oh jannet can you believe that me and steeve haven't had sex yet.
Is it just not the right time?
I hope it will be soon it's been almost two months since we started seeing each other!
I bet he will be good in bed, or at least better then my ex Richard was! *giggles*
he was awful! You can't even imagine! And lucky you jannet
you didn't have to listen to any of that stuff I wrote about
him most of it was too sappy any way.
I have decided that I am going to leave you in peace until we finally have sex.
The only thing I am going to write in you are poems that
I feel like writing if that is okay with you jannet?

I am going to finish this entry with a poem I wrote,
it is a fantasy of what mine and steeves first time will be like =)
hope you enjoy it!

Nights of love,

Nights of love,
nights of passion,
two bodies becoming one,
the power and the strength,
of love in the making,
the clash of two people,
as they moan in complete pleasure,
two hearts joined as one,
two bodies hot against each other,
moving together as one,
enjoying the time they have together,
as the moment ends,
they separate,
and lay next to each other,
breathing In sync with each other's hearts,
still acting as one.



(Unknown date)
Getting so close I can almost feel it!

Temptation

A feathers touch,
A angels kiss,
the light within,
let the fight begin,
the light inside,
the darkness all around,
which will you choose tonight,
a angels kiss,
or a demons tempting lips?


(page 4)

__________________________________________________________________
Steeve laughed as he read the poems remembering that wonderful night.
_____________________________________________________________________



January 10th 2010
Sorry I have not wrote in you in for like ever! Sooooo!
Happy Christmas and Happy New-year!
Sorry I am a little late like I said earlier but I did buy you a present!
A new pen for me to write in you with! Are you happy? I sure hope so!
Oh and we did it jannet! It was so amazing! And he is so good!
Just like in the poem I wrote!
I won't go into any of the yummy details I don't want to harm your virgin ears.
Or uh pages... whatever it is you have.
Oh and guess what else happened Jannet he proposed to me! I'm getting married!
YAY ME!!!!!
Hey jannet I have to go walk woody my new dog so I will write in you later!
LOVE BETH! <3

____________________________________________________________-
He thinks about all the good times and takes a few minutes to sob into the pillow
That was next to him before he continued to read.
___________________________________________________________________



(page 5)


February 12th 2010.

Oh Jannet me and steeve had a fight! I don't know what to do I am so upset!
I wish you could talk to me I bet if you could talk you would be able to help.



February 20th 2010
He has not come home tonight Jannet we had another
fight the stupid thing is I don't even remember what it is about.....
Later love Beth <3



Pain

pain in my chest,
why dose this hurt so much,
I kneel over and fall to my side,
and cry the night through,
I wake up in the morning and put a smile on my face,
and go through out my day like the pain has been erased,
I pour myself some tea and climb into the shower,
slower than normal but I wash away the mascara,
I put on my make up and get ready for the day,
I sip at my tea and the day slides away.



May 10th 2010
Well things are basically back to normal so that a good thing
I am sorry I haven't wrote in you again, all my other diaries
are probably mad at me for not writing in you so much......
I am so sorry it is just that I am so busy
I don't have much time to write any more
I have a job and I have steeve and he has a job
and we have a dog and our flat to take care of. It is just alot of work!
Love Beth! <3

(page 6)


July 28th 2010

Me and steeve broke up I think it was last night on the phone
we were yelling he was out of town for work and
we got into a huge argument over the phone and when he hung up
he said he wished I was dead.... sorry jannet but I think
I am going to leave you and do is last wish of me.
I love you jannet and I always will. If I can I will write in you after I die.
That would be cool wouldn't it?

This is my finally good byes in these last words to you,
I love you jannet and jannet? Make sure steeve knows I love him to....



















Un Known date

JANNET!

Razor blade

Razor blade on the ground,
blood pooled all around,
what did she do,
why end her life,
why destroy her world tonight,
gashes on her wrists,
and tape over her mouth,
she died a criminal,
a Suicidal murder.

Hello steeve you are an awful awful person and I wish you will die!
Love your dead ex Beth <3


p.s. sound familiar?


(page 7)



Steeve ran out of the room and to the bathroom and puked up
his guts heaving stomach full after stomach full into the toilet
sobbing his heart out between breaths as he stops throwing up.
He slides to the floor and cries till the morning.

Steeve wakes up and as he stands up he looks into the bathroom mirror,
the mirror was all steamed up and written on it, it said. Eat and then finish.
Love Beth <3

He threw up again and crying a little more and then followed his fiancés wishes.
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(page Cool


Last entry: august 1st 2010

Dear jannet,

Everything is better now I have one real last words of good bye to you and steeve, oh jannet steeve will get this entry and if he is a good boy he will put it where it is supposed to be in you. Please accept this entry as part of you because I have nowhere else for it to go.
STEEVE! STOP READING THIS NOW! In the closet there is a diary go in there and put this where the torn out page is and read it after you read everything else.
Steeve continued to read sobbing he continues to read as tear drops fall onto the last page.


Loving life, loving death, my name was beth I was not normal, but I was nice and kind, I always seemed to need to unwind, my love was short but I do not care it was love that killed me in the end, love is kind, love is blind, and so was I to everything that he tried to tell me, He called it quits and so did I, right then and there I took my own life, with a smile on my face and his name on my lips, I slid to the ground and said farewell.
Steeve I love you and I forgive you for what you said I now know that you loved me and you were just mad, now it is time to forgive me and to forgive yourself move on and make something of your life.
P.s. steeve I love you now and forever.



And jannet I can never forget you I love you for being here for me through my final days and I wish you were real so I could have hugged you while I was alive. I am going to move on now to a better life.

Love Beth! <3



(final page of diary and steves last days)


Steeve walked out of the room feeling happy he made himself some breakfast and then cleaned the house. And then continued to follow the last and final words of his lovely fiancé.
Steeve lived until he was 85 he got married to a women named Jannet and they had three kids together Jess a boy, Hope a girl, and Beth named after Beth herself.
Steeves daughter Beth got all of beth's diaries and when she had kids of her own she named them after the names of the diaries.
Steeves last words he said before he died were. Dear Jannet.
THE END.
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:41 am

I remember this story. love it.
It may be upsetting, but its a great short story.
Keep it up Twin
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:54 am

thanks i thought i would post it in here. thanks twin =3
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:59 am

No problem twin, its a good idea to post it on here.
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:01 am

i need to finish the other one.... but im stuck
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:32 am

well people please tell me what you think i need feed back!
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:37 pm

Wow. I wish this was in book form. So good. Keep writting you have a gift.
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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:05 pm

ya, it's great. minus the sexual content. This site is for ages tweleve and up. And I'm tweleve, so ya. And thats to bad cause its a great story.

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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Tue Aug 23, 2011 11:31 am

Wow Really good. I think you are awesome. I like how you have done it in a diary. Keep up the good work.

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PostSubject: Re: Beth's diary   Tue May 01, 2012 9:15 am

T_T Soo sweet yet soo sad! Just reminds us that words can hurt the ones that we loved more than we ever know! Great work and keep on writing.
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