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Kim
Going about a regular day
   Age: 18 Posts: 9 Join date: 2010-11-04
 | | Subject: Poetry of KIM :3 Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:58 am | |
| Loveless My name is Breathless
I can’t breathe when you are near
My name is Memoryless
I have no memories, only fear
My name is Bondless
There can’t be a bond between you and me
My name is Friendless
I don’t have any friends as you can see
My name is Sleepless
I just stay awake and think of you
My name is Painless
There’s only emptiness and nothing you can do
My name is Tearless
There are no tears left to cry
My name is Trustless
Can’t trust anyone just want to die
My name is Skinless
There’s no outside to show me
My name is Nameless
There’s just nothing I can be
My name is Warless
I don’t want to fight
My name is Endless
I want to be forever by your side
But I will destroy everything we’ve built together
My name is Loveless,
I can never have true love forever.
This poem is based on the anime Loveless.
Well, it hasn't much to do with it, but the names in this poem
are the names of the episodes of Loveless. |
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 Age: 18 Posts: 24501 Location: Dragons lair Join date: 2010-05-13
Character sheetName: Fiction Sullivan Age: 18 Affinities : Mentaly Inflicts Pain and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Poetry of KIM :3 Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:16 pm | |
| thats good i like it keep it up!  |
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 Age: 16 Posts: 2239 Location: Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date: 2009-07-14
| | Subject: Re: Poetry of KIM :3 Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:00 am | |
| Loveless - Touching piece of write. How creative of you to come up with a poem based on the episodes of an anime! Your poem makes me want to watch the anime. (just wondering, what's your rating of the anime on the scale of 10? ><) |
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Kim
Going about a regular day
Age: 18 Posts: 9 Join date: 2010-11-04
| | Subject: Re: Poetry of KIM :3 Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:11 am | |
| | *~Dreamer~* wrote: | | Loveless - Touching piece of write. How creative of you to come up with a poem based on the episodes of an anime! Your poem makes me want to watch the anime. (just wondering, what's your rating of the anime on the scale of 10? ><) |
hm...i prefer reading the Manga... but i would give it a 8 |
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Age: 16 Posts: 2239 Location: Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date: 2009-07-14
| | Subject: Re: Poetry of KIM :3 Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:58 am | |
| continue to write!
I didn't have time to watch the anime/ read the manga. school, school, school.
perfect excuse for everything a student has!
but yeah, will watch it at the end of this year. |
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nightstar
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
  Age: 15 Posts: 88 Location: U.S.A Join date: 2011-10-30
| | Subject: Re: Poetry of KIM :3 Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:57 pm | |
| Love Your Poem & Title =) |
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