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PostSubject: Comments - The One   Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:22 pm

The story The One can be found Here


I think it's good and you should keep going! The title makes me curious...who is 'the one'? He, she or someone we don't know yet? Good start. *smiles*
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PostSubject: Comments - The One   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:28 am

thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments - The One   Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:13 am

i desited to not finnish it... i find it like dumb... idk if more people tell me its not dumb and they would read it and love it i prob will re start it but i re read it and it seems lame... is it just me?
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