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PostSubject: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:09 am

here are poems that i write on my free time or im bored outta of my mind so they are gonna be really ad and crappy.

~Once in Love~

I was once in love
but know i cry
from the broken heart left to die
you said you loved me
but i see that you lied
I scream your name in my sleep
you sit in your room and think
you wish you could take back what you done
but you knew its over when nothing begun
I felt the knife in my back
when you left me for her and took her back
know these word i scream
The knife you left in my back i will use to make you scream!



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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:51 am

Your writings are not bad!!
Psht, there's no such thing as a bad poem!
And yours was amazing~!
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:53 am

((sorry for the double post, buuut))
I also really like the loose rhyme scheme(:
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:55 am

lol no its fine thanks ^.^ i messed up though i forgot to put the (s) at the end of the word , word lol
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:50 pm

heres a little poem i wrote in history yesterday.

Life and death
Is just like
Ying and yang
One cant live without the other
To opposites live together in harmony
Just like you and I
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:52 am

Here's another this one is bad. i ahd a dream about a vampire and woke up at 2 am and wrote this its bad here it is:


Through the haze
i see red eyes
just beyond the grave
i see through your lies
i know what you are
and i'm not scared
for your just a man
that has no life plan
I'll save you from your pain
I'll show you the light of the day
for you are just a vampire
that has never felt the passion of love
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:23 pm

Im on the role today but this one is also crappy i have been up fro 20 minutes and this come to head hey their fun to rite but i suck lol ^.^ here it is

Grim reaper

I sneak up and snatch away
The ones you love
And take those you hate
But then I come and take you away
I throw them to hell
I send you to heaven
But I am stuck in the afterlife to watch you live as an angel but here I stand a grim reaper I didn’t mean to take your life but I just had to to keep her away from you
I couldn't stand it much longer the love I once had now givin to another
I pry for you in the afterlife
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:12 pm

these are good i like them and the vampire one isn't bad for writting at 2 amin the morning lol ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Fri Jan 21, 2011 2:38 am

Thanks ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Fri Jan 21, 2011 8:57 pm

Your poems are awesome! Keep writing! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:36 pm

Thank you ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:34 pm

Crappy yes yes i know no its not but in my mind "what the hell is that i just worte"thought i would share it anyways

I walk down the road
I wonder "when will it snow"
I hug myself and wonder
"how will I fall for you"
maybe i already have
but i haven't hit bottom yet
come to me and help me fly
for now i know
i have fallen for you
as an angel has for me.


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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:24 am

Crappy poem i know but its just how I feel..............

I sit in the dark
I cry myself to sleep
I never thought this could happen
The day you leave me
I miss you so much
My heart breaks
as it aches
I never thought love could hurt so much
I was wrong
know i now thats a lie
love is a trap
in which your heart is left to die
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:15 am

you wright amazing poems.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:52 am

Thanks! ^.^ their not that good, but thanks! cute
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:06 pm

they are that good there awesome
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:29 pm

^.^ Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:35 pm

^.^ your welcome
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Wed Feb 09, 2011 2:01 pm

I like them Smile I think they are really good and don't ever let ANYONE tell you otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:25 am

Thanks ^.^
Heres another

In the light of the day
I wait to be taken away
For I know life is just a song
And every song ends
So for my last verse
I will say
Life is just a song we all just play a part in
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Thu Feb 10, 2011 1:16 am

Burn baby burn
For the fire is hot
And you cant take the heat
I hear your screams
As tears fall down my cheek
But its what you get
When you betray
The ones you love
For those they hate
Be bathed in fire and flam
Endure the pain
And think of your betrayal
This was your fate
To be burned in the inferno

Burn baby burn
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Thu Feb 10, 2011 1:55 am

Yet again, it's really good. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Thu Feb 10, 2011 4:22 pm

Remember

Remember when you loved me
Remember you took my heart
now my love is gone
Now my heart is broken
They can't be fixed
Nor can I
Why did you leave me
Why did you chose her
I gave you the world
But in the end I just got a broken heart
and tears left to dry
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:29 pm

mmm another kinda lame i was just bored


I was once in love
But know its lost
Only to be found again
By the one I love most
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PostSubject: Re: My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!   Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:21 pm

there really awesome and your really good
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