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PostSubject: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 09, 2011 1:51 am

Welcome to my poetry contest!

I hope to continue this competition with at least one more round after this.

Some very simple rules to abide by:
1. Please post no more than three of your best poems for competition.
2. Please include a title for every write entered for the competition. Entries without titles WILL NOT included in judgement.
3. Please place your poem under spoilers if you want viewer discretion. ( this is to respect the younger population on this site)
4. Lastly, HAVE FUN POSTING!

Top three poems will be selected (with no repeated poets).

First Place: Have both your name and work in Hall Of Fame AND this graphic to add to your signature.

First Runner Up: Name in Hall of Fame AND this graphic to add to your signature.

Second Runner up: This graphic to add to your signature.



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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 09, 2011 8:43 pm

Death and Sadness

Deep thoughts, Dark nights
But what Fill the day Breaks?
Sleep sounds fill happiness to the
Ones of the dead. Happiness only
Comes every so often.

Sometimes when I sit here,
Waist deep in thought
Feeling so lonely
Bad things rush through my head
I don't know what to do
And it makes me sad.

My days are ending short.
As I sit here letting Blood
Drip. I won’t my life end
Like my Family and friends.
I Beg for hope and
Happiness. Even the
One I love tries to make
Me happy. But death
Rushes in my head.

I watch the people
Hunt him to death. Tourchering
Him. I wanted to help but
I stayed and watched.

I made them pay for what
They did. Was I the only one?
Left in this world? Why did they
Run and scream Vampire.

Lord I pray for hope
For an end to my cause.
No one responded. As I Was
Left to die and hope to
See everyone in the after
Life.

I was wrong. Hope responded
To me to someone who I loved
Walked to me and got me slowly
Back to happiness.


Demon Stole My Heart

Demon You Surround me
with Darkness, worsens
with each minute. Life
you take away is worce but
you need the power. i have
regreted you for takeing
my soul.

Your Darkness surrounds
me wherever I go. Whatever
could have been? I will
never know because your
ways are all that you want
me to know. Demon you stole
my heart.

You have pulled me back
into your world. But yet I
wount let you keep me here
forever. You may of caused
trouble but you can never hold
me here. YOu defencless. How
pity. I will fight you again
to the end. HOpe you will
learn your lesson then.

With one touch my heart
died, with the demons venom
crawling threw my vein, a
heart once made of gold,
a diamond in the rough know ends
in a never ending darkness, its
there and it has stained my heart.
with Dark, dark shadow.

I Have lost this battle,
you have gain strenght more
so. My life has ended for
all entrnty. Take mylife away
as you please. your free to
roam this world. As for me I will
be in a better place.


Demon Stole My Soul.

The dark over comes
my lifeless soul a
Neverending darkness.
I feel as though there
will never be any light.

Oh Demon How forever
you will be Danmed. You
hurt my life, you will
hurt many more. Oh Demon
you want to be a leader
well nice try I will never let
you hold me down. Demon
you stole my soul.

You Took what little chance
I thought I had to get throgh
this place. You really think
I'm going to come to you?
I thought I could truxt you
to help me but I was wrong.
You really think I'm Going to
come back to you? NO! I
Will fight you to the end.

Demon You have destroed my
life but you cant destory me
now. Even if you tried. Come on
take my chalenge. You dont
want to die now do you? Well
you shouldent have stole my soul
in the first place. Demon you have
stole my soul.

Demon I am not longer yours
you need to hear me out.
You do not seem to understand
where I am coming from.
Just let me say that I
would die before I would
conform. Because I am
finished with you now
Since you stole my soul.

I will block your every try
to take me over. I will stand
up and defeat you, you will
be left alone. I am Warning
you now, you will not win.
I will give you one
Chance to back down
right now. NO? You dont
want to? Okay here we
go.

Demon you have lost this
battle. Relsae all the souls
you have chapured. I hate to
leave you here in this damed
place. But you Shall be forever
traped here and never relses. You
will die in this place as you stay
here. Never to return to the Earth
Again.

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 09, 2011 10:44 pm

My Soul's Tears

You cut me deep when you left.
My mind a blur always racing.
Thinking about you, non-stop, all the time.
I can't let you go, because of what you did.
My soul just cries with tears of blue.
Longing for revenge.
For myself, I long for death.
To see all the pain.
Revenge isn't the best path, to visit along the way.
But we all choose the wrong things sometimes,
Just to make each day.
The world works funny.
Especially with love.
And what you add to it with all the tears and blood.
My soul still cries the tears of blue.
Because I will forever long for you.



Life and After life

Death is not always a choice.
We don't always want to die,
because we have to much to do with life.

Life is not always a choice either.
We don't always want to live,
because we have to many problems with life.

Being stuck between the two,
is the most horrid thing in the world.
You could go either way.
When your on the brink of death,
and when your still alive.

Waiting for death, doesn't come and go easily.
It's like waiting for your heart to be broken,
or for you to fall and trip.

You never want to underestimat life and death.
For it is an unforgivable crime.
If or when you don't believe in them,
is the day you are eternally damned.
Damned to a life of hell, pain, and suffering.

Saying goodbye to life,
is no different than saying good bye to death.
It's both hard.
To say goodbye to life, is
saying goodnye to everyone you love,
leaving them and never coming back.
To say goodnye to death is to say hello,
to a life of hell living again.

And when you die,
you notice how nice life was to you,
even with it's downside.
So live life while you have it!
You never know when your going to meet death in the face.

Dark Moonlight

There is only on true night,
of dark moonlight for one person.
It's only one night, never again,
sometimes not even at all.
The night in people's lives of dark moonlight,
is the night that they truely find their soulmate.
Some people don't find their's off of dumb stupid bad luck.
The average person in a life time,
will feel dead from heartbreak more than,
100 times or somewhere close to that.
The most romantic and most lasting night of dark moonlight,
comes to notice on New Year's Eve and Day.
No matter where you are or how far apart,
your mate will relize that you are the one,
or you will relize it.
You will both entirely let it consume you,
and never look back at your decision.
Dark Moonlight is Fine.
Dark Moonlight is Changing
But most of all Dark Moonlight is Beutiful

-all origionals by Nyx's Blue Vamp a.k.a. janelly <3 <3 Razz LMAO


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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Tue May 10, 2011 7:54 pm

Here are my poems, they're short and sweet:

Dangorus
You turned around and faced me,
with your large, determind eyes,
The path that's brought me here,
why is it in disguise?
The truth that lies beneath the surface,
that's what I'm here to relize,
It's not glorious,
you're victorius,
It's just to bad your Dangorus.


In my arms, safe
I remember you darling,
you were so fierce and strong
Your arm's wrapped around me,
Like a humming bird song,
your eyes so unharmed,
Your life and mine conbined,
don't you break my heart,
Don't leave us on the line
I see thease words in my head,
everyday before I go to bed
In the morn I wake up to an alarm,
right after you died in my arms.



Blessed Be

The disapointing day,
Weather wrong, or how,
Is something passed away,
Is ended now,

forgive, forgive the scars,
And sleep will find you soon,
the gleaming stars beneath the moon.



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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Thu May 12, 2011 10:52 pm

About a week or two left! Still need a couple more talented poets to join!

And i sincerely thank all who have submitted entries for thia competition!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Fri May 13, 2011 7:13 am

I give this a shot. Here we go^^


Beginner

I don’t know anything
Can’t do anything
I’m young and that’s fine
Don’t know anything
Can’t do it right away
And that’s why I have possibilities
The rain has stopped
The wind blows my hair
This is the time
Don’t have to know anything, beginner



Best friend

So many miracles
The time seems perfect
I’m gonna shout it now
Can’t live without you
Thousand words
Like stars on the sky
Life is about chances
We can take them if we want
I wanna be with you
My best friend
Best thing of friendship
Is to laugh together
Thank you for giving me
Such wonderful dreams



Cross the river

Are we dreaming?
All of our life ahead of us
Can’t wait ‘til tonight
We can finally fly
So are we dreaming now?
Tear off the chains
That imprison us
You don’t have to know a thing
We can be reborn all the time

Look the world
So colorful
So soothing
We have to do our best
Just cross the river
You can do it!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Sun May 15, 2011 1:03 pm

Lies that break
I tell them..
But i hate to.
I want them to know
But then they will end my happyness
End my love.
Break me..
What do i so with the kies it told

Cant escape the nigtmare
When i close my eyes i see it
I wake up and cry
They wont end
They come back
Im scared my dream catcher is to full of nightmares
Or that they will come true
I cant run..
I cant escape these horrible dreams
Because everytime i close my eyes...
They're there.
And now im scared to sleep


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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 16, 2011 11:50 am

A Path To Choose

I stand breathless in the cold night wind,
The air whips around me as I take my final Step.

I step into the shadows, Where darkness overcomes.
I never knew it would consume me, but I thought wrong.
I wraps around me like a blanket, I think I can stay safe, and have no worries.
Only soon do I realize, It's just a mistake, Reminding me of how many I have Done.

I take one step away, but it doesn't release,
Icry out for help, but noone hears me,
Is this what it feels like to be isolated?
To know nothing but the Darkness that consumes me?

Not but a few steps in front of me a path appears,
It splits at the end, Left or right?
One is for Light and the other for Dark,
Where can i go whenI am entangled with Darkness?


Can i find my own path?
Or keep straying away?

Only one can decide,
And That one is me..
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Sat May 21, 2011 11:37 am

10 more days!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Sun May 22, 2011 10:00 pm

My world


I take a breathe

Close my eyes

And drift off to my world

Away from the pain and sadness

Knowing That once my eyes open

I'll be back to the place i wish i never

was


Thank You

I smile

Laugh

show that nothing can rain on my parade.

I smile to hid the sadness

I laugh at myself seeing how unreal i am

Things ruined my day already

You see... It's tough

Talking about it doesn't seem to change anything

crying just is something i don't do

Go ahead... Leave.

I dealt with things like this before.

Pain, Lost, Hate, Sadness

I know each time i get knocked down

I'll come back stronger then before

So... Thank You for everything
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 23, 2011 11:28 am

Midnight
Shadows in shawdows,
Sea of diamonds,
Layer the skies.

A woman is lifted,
To the highest heaven,
She is the night.

He her cry,
Sing her call,
Draws life in

She'll change you once,
But never again,
Branded for life, as her own.

The immortals song

For years I stood,
Forever i'll be,
Time no issue,
As old as the sea.

They call me wise,
King of medieval,
A bearer of light,
Or a sorcerer of evil?

Chase me away,
But I'll always return,
To my earthly possesion, To this,
She must learn.

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 23, 2011 11:32 am

Heart Broken Death

You turned away from me
You left me all alone
I slowly let myself go
Falling to my death
I fend everything off
I want to be alone
I want to be dead
Why won't you let me

Nothing feels true anymore
I want to feel the pain
I want it to feel real
Please, just let me
I know you won't do it
Matters are now in my hands
Slowly and painfully
I bring myself to death



Moonlight

Beyond the soft flowing river
Beneath the swaying trees
Feel the breeze around you
Wrapping you in warmth
Walk out into the Meadow
The flowers growing tall
Look up onto the sky
The dusky moonlight shines

Walk through the meadow with me
Hand in hand we go together
Walking by the riverside
Looking into the blackness of the water
Lay down beside me, oh fair maiden
Look into the midnight cloak of night
Watch the stars shine over us both
Watch the fair moonlight shine bright



Emo's Love

She sits alone in her room
Wishing her family would love her
Wishing her friends would talk to her
Wanting to fit in somewhere in life

From under her pillow she recovered
A blade she used to cut herself
To her throat she held it steady
One quick slit and she was dead

Later that day her boyfriend found her
He wept at the body of his true love
Out of her hand the blade to his throat
Cut across he joined her forever


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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Mon May 23, 2011 12:15 pm

Just a note to all valued poets:
Please keep all your entries to one post (meaning, edit your original post if you want to add additional poems/ change poems).

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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:24 am

THREAD CLOSED FOR JUDGING!
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:24 am

Results will be out anytime. (:
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PostSubject: Re: Dreamer's Poetry Contest ( May 9th - May 31st) ENDED   Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:03 am

Dear participants,

All of your entries are valued and needed in this competition, and there is definitely not one of you worse off than the other in writing. It's just because there's only one judge, and even if there are many, it's because the perception of the judges are different from that of yours -- We all view poetry through a filter known as our life. So through this filter of mine I see something different from what you do, although the emotions may be similar. Fortunately, I managed to get a friend to help me make the judgement a little more fair, the day before. But I guess... Birds of a feather flock together >< So we came to a unanimous decision of the following three Poets and writes.

In the short judgement period, it was indeed difficult to choose between the different poets and their writes. I appreciate all of you for your patience as you await the results of the competition. (Started judging after the last poem came in, which means judging was before the competition deadline. But if any entries were to come in after that last poem, but before the deadline, it will be taken into consideration as well)

Here, I must add that all writes had their own unique feel, styles and forms, which made it a difficult choice to determine the winners as everyone presented their skills differently. Most of all, I enjoyed every write, and I hope everyone enjoyed writing your poems for this contest too!

The most ardous part of the whole competition for me, was the awaiting of participants. As you can see, there was a 4 day break some time through the competition, but it was a great relief that more joined afterwards.


Finally, after such a lengthy disclaimer, the results are as follows:

First Place: Livi, Midnight
First Runner Up: Midnight Demon, My World
Second Runner up: Emo Kitty, Moonlight



Once again, I extend my greatest appreciation to all participants of this contest, for without all of your entries, it would not have been as exciting a comptition as it is!

Judges of Competition:
-Fiona (A friend of mine) and Dreamer (Me)
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