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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:13 pm

Unknown Face
Standing here and looking out into the darkness.
I feel at home here in the shadows.
The things that I had fear seemed to disappear
the dreams have faded from my head.
I drop my weapon.
The cold steel makes a clank as it hits the ground.
My life seemed too changed right in front of my eyes.
I take in the breath and hold on tight
my ears started to change
they goes into a point and becomes floppy.
The cool wind blows in my fur.
I change into a beautiful beast
I let out a cry that turned into a howl.
My long bushy tail wiggled around in circles.
My cares of this form comes to me.
I shift the ground from under my feet without making a sound.
I smile a kennel grin as I take off into the darkness.
Free to roam this world and be just me and nothing else.
No mask to cover up what I have done
or to hind from my past.
To looked at my reflection and see ME
not this girl that stands in my place around everything


Our home or Not
I close my eye and wish will all that I am
Take us away from this hell
That was once our little piece of haven
Take us to somewhere we can be us
Were we don't have to worried about stupid people
Were our yard is our yard.
Let it all burn away from us
I dined thee to a life of hell
I dined thee to a life of hell
who would had done this.
Well I am thinking about it.
There so much better than what I am been livening.
I am I living a life of lies
or just a life of Hell???
I didn't know I wish I could tell you all just go fu*k yourselves and move on
with my little life
But I don't have the voice for it.


War
In my heart
I hear the sounds of the drums
The Drums of war
As the night
Takes me to a place
were the war
Has taken over all that I think could be
Taking breath as
Children cries in the night
What would be there
In my heart
I heard the voices of
What I thought could be
Holding this prison


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:27 pm

The Shadow I have become
Smile as I was part of the Shadows in my room.
I was long and forgotten under the sun
in the night I was left to live.
Marked me and burned me
Let it all come down like rain
Leave me here by myself
What could I do
As I was forsaken to this world
I didn't know if I could really live like this again
Forgotten here in my little world
Among the Shadows
I could call them too me and leave this place behind me.
I curled up to the darkness as the night sings it song
Burn me and marked me
Leave me and Tease me
Love me and fight me
GO ahead and forget me
I don't care anymore let me live my life as I see it
I belong here in the night !
Leave me here were I feel like that I am loved.


Love
Love is it you?
Or is it me?
Or is it this place in my mind
the land that cuts us
deep in the heart of everything
the darkness comes around yet again
my tears spilled upon the ground
Cold and die...
Please say it not our love!

Love
it is you?
Or is it me?
The place that I lay my head at every night
the sent is so sweet
the wrath seemed to be there
but they looked in your eyes seemed to
die with each words I speak.
Have we let it weather and die?
Cut our love and let it bleed!

You and me
me or you?
Love or pain?
Pain and Love
Let it all go under
as this world cut us and it bleed
I don't want this anymore
the pain of the world around us
that does not want us to love or be happy.

Let this die
Let them be right
Let them see us walk away from everything
Everything that we build
Let them see it burn
Light it up and watch it all go away with
A firefly blames
Our bleeding love
As to end some way
So let us take it like this one
Write the hate notes
Let the tears run down our face
Let them see us pain of all is gone
Paint the picture they want to see
Ripe out our hearts for them
Forget everything we have been through...
Let the fight end with our blood on the floor.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:33 pm

Air Cast
Brother Air
Without you we can't breathe
we can't live without you.
You bring so much life to us.
May you wisher the secret that we want to know
you are our brother
In the name of Nyx I call Air to my circle
May you protect us as big brother would.


Fire Cast
Sister Fire
Without you we would not know wrath of the night
your flame burns within us all.
It is want gives us life.
May your flame light show us the way to enlighten
you are our sister
In the name of Nyx I call Fire to my circle
May you show us beauty as a sister would.


Water Cast
Father Water
without you we couldn't be
you make up our very body
your steam runs though us.
May you show us a father's love.
You are our Father.
In the name of Nyx I call Water to my circle
May you guide us through our life as a protection as father would.


Earth Cast.
Mother Earth
Without you we are nothing.
You give us somewhere to live
somewhere to call home.
May we heal you one day
You are our great mother
In the name of Nyx I call Earth to my circle.
May you guild us like a kind mother


Spirit Cast
Great Spirit
Without you we would be lifeless.
You glowing life lives within each of us.
You give us our way of life
May you never leave us when we need you most
you are our playful spirit
In the name of Nyx I call Spirit to my circle
May you show us a new way to live.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:36 pm

Why linger here?
To linger here and knowing something
I can see them hurt and pain
I want to help them but I can't
the moon light shine down at them.
And they are able to make their self happy but yet they sit in the dark
I don't know why I am here in the dark of souls around me
Magic and power pounding around me
Holding my breath as the night turn into the dawn
Loving to hear her words of love and hope
Knowing it would all fall on false hopes
And all would die in the heart and soul
Deep breaths and understanding what is going on.
I looked around at each of their faces knowing that there is no helping them
OH great one what could happen if I would just show myself and show them
what could happen to them.
To linger here and not knowing home and love ever again,
Just people passing by and living a life that I once had.
I am just a shadow to them and nothing more
No more can be really there.
I am just a fly on the wall .
No voice of my own
No life at all
Just a shadow
Unsure if they knew that I once lived there where they call home
I just linger here and let things go on
Why do I linger here knowing there could be something better out there for me?


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:39 pm

Raven's calls
Breath with every step you take
to face the unknown as the Raven Calls
Power untold will show itself
in a form shown to our kind!

Shadow Raven lacking around
weary minds watches with no age
New Protections will be cast
Ones that hate each other will join forces!

Raven calls to it father
Whose lays beneath the Earth
Lost and forgotten but soon will rise
To struck fear in women alike

The Queen do dance to see her beloved king
'Rise old Great One!' she do calls out
As the Ravens take their form
The Earth do cries as the wicked kind rise

Oh, how we weep as the Earth dies
Taken from us once
Why yet another time
Arrow straight and true

Oh the Raven Calls
The earth do bleed
The wicked one rise
Is all hope lose with the earth?


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:44 pm

One Year
going under
One year
Nothing different than before
Lost and confused
under pressure
No Job
Life is going down a path
Unsure and losing the battle
One year
Nothing just like before
No pretty things to show off to people
Just my old shoes
Wallet empty
Wanting something to show from all the work I did
Nothing has changed...
Just us with nothing but hate for the place that we call home for now
Losing what I thought I knew was home
Then Look around me there was no home from the beginning


Pieces
Pieces by Pieces
you slowly make a picture
do you disgusted by what it looked like
Forgotten and lost
Like shards of glass scared around you
broken dreams and hopes
unwanted to fight all the time
Letting it all go
Throw it all as it all come down around you.


Dream
Dreaming of something else as I sit here and looking out into the darkness
I let this time slip away as if I couldn't do anything to hold it close
braking down to what I think is real
All that is around me seemed fake.


Unknown past
The heat beating down on me
As we work I hear the sound of the past
Why must the voices come to me?
The heat of battle comes ringing back in my ear
Pain and the lost comes racing back to me
Tears are hind by my sweat as I work.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:48 pm

To Stormy~
Skin like an angle
Voice of a goddess
Graces as of a butterfly
Wised like an owl

As I looked into your eyes
My body takes me away
As I long to have you by my side
Hoping that this high will last forever!

To feel you’re silk like skin on my hand
as I touch your cheek
Sweet whispers run through my mind
only if I could really speak them out loud!

Your voice seemed to chase this fear away
that had a tight hold on me
Oh my lady of fair
what could you ever see in me?

I have no money to buy you pretty things
No car to take you out in
No place for you in my past
only in my future do you have a place with me.

I may have no money
maybe not even the best looking face around...
I have my words to tell you how beautifully you are
my love are unmated by any gold or silver that the others could bring you!

You may say this is a bold question
You may just turn around and slap me
I have to asked it or I will die if I never knew what you would say
Would you kiss me and got out on a date with me?

~Raph~


Warrior Oath to You
Story of a warrior
has come to be born to night
she will service her lady of fair
with her life.
She is now bound to her and her alone.
She in barks into a new form of Son of Erebus
First of her kind in hopes that others will follow her.
Lady Rei she will do her will
for she had freely chosen to be at her side.
Waited too long to bow her head and after her sword to her.
Gratefully Lady Rei had taken her on her oath.
Now only death can break the bond.


Great One
Hands of broken helped.
Promised left undone
lands and heart is one.
Water and fire never touch
Heart and soul is all but other
Eagle and Wolf runs and plays
Twins of two sides of a coin
Random with Since
Love and hate
Passed and fall
Forgive and Unknown
Foreseen and undone.
What can you hear the words that come to us
Oh Great One full us up and let it all fall down to
To those who do us harm!
Take and given
Love and Hate
Heart and soul
we are one for now and forever
nothing can break the bond now!
We are lovers for different life.
Let it be done
OH GREAT ONE!


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:50 pm

Past Life Nightmare
I can't shack it
The feeling keeps coming back to me
Can I really breath
I see the light again
And it still night fall
Let the wait end and fade with this night
Sweet voices Chanted to me
I followed the voices
You are who you are
Dreamer
Fighter
Protector
You are a part of me as I am to you
The dream unfolds before me
Helpless hands go unsteady
As I dream of him yet again
I dream of Sin...
The darkness pulled me back into the burning hate and fear.
you are who you are
Dirtied
Nothing
Trash
You are a part of me as I am to you
Trapped under her shadows
They seemed to cast out farther than I can run
Miles away and I am still judged by her.
Compared to the one that I hate
the one that I love
It can't be...
Slowly breathing in and out
will there ever be a brake for me?
Never because I will die then be reborn
into something sadder than what I am today.
From a pretty princess to a poor little girl that barely can make it.
From a medaions man daughter to this...
my blood line slowly dies
I am the last of my kind...
So I thought
Then I met him...
The man that I had married or almost married in my past lives
nothing came close killed by his own brother.
Thank god I got him now.....


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:51 pm

Dark side of life
Lost and can't be found
I don't know who I am.
I don't know what I should do
I turn into a closed door.
I kick and banged nothing but hate and coldness comes over
Sick to my stomach
Tears pours over me
Red room....
Pain and lost
Forgotten
In the loops
Rules to be broken
Love to have
a world out there from our own.
Not in our mind but into the spirit!
I can't keep listening to the little voices that mean nothing to me.
It hurts but I can move on.
Fading in the darkness that is around me.
But yet I can see the light out there
something is holding me back.
What can I do
what I am?
Screaming and the hatred taking over us all
It something I have to do
I know that feelings will be hurt.
So what...
I have been hurting too long.
WHY must I be this way?
Don't let me go love
I don't know who I am!
I put a wall up to keep everything out...
I didn't want it to keep you out...
I don't want to hurt you but it seemed that I am hurting you anyways
I can see it in your eyes.
What can I say or do to make you see what I am going through
Please don't turn away from me!


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:12 pm

Untold Nightmare
In the shadows
I lay waiting
for my vacuums
slowly they walk
down a path
they know not of
Death that lays ahead
for us all.
Some will go with great proud
Some will go with nothing at all
All I have to say is remember this face;
It will be the last thing you see
Before you draw your last breath!
I sit and wait
for the cold to come for me
though it has came close many of times
but never fully covers me
as it has the others.
So here I lay awake waiting for it
to come for me
Blood lust
is what it is
Come and have your full
For I know my blood is tented
By the past
Of which has led me here
Screaming of nightmares
Unsure of the daylight
Let us dance in the moonlight
As it takes us by our souls tonight
Let us know who awaits for us
Death and disperse
Life and Desire
I throw my hands up in the air
As I wait in the shadows
For what most may not be able to see
Demons of the shadow realms
The weak will fall
The strong will fade
Battle undone
Going on for many years
Let it go they tell me
I can't for is battle as took too much from me
Dream of the end
Yet fear the end...
Irony just thinking about it.
Wish for something that is not evil
Yet look at the past
Burned for what I am
Hunted because I was feared
Exited by the one I loved
Killed by family
Speared by none
The path of a freak like me
What am I?
I don't know myself.


Unknown past
The heat beating down on me
As we work I hear the sound of the past
Why must the voices come to me?
The heat of battle comes ringing back in my ear
Pain and the lost comes racing back to me
Tears are hind by my sweat as I work.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:13 pm

Confined what I am.
Look at what I am…
Can you see the true me as I lay here
Waiting for you my love
Do you know what I have done?
Do you really care what you love?
I am not human…
Nor am I vampire
Or werewolf
I am a freak
Can’t you see that there is no saving me?
Just cut me and kill me
Save yourself from this despair.
That I am sure I will give you
With every kiss is sealed with a lie…
Why do I let you keep going with this lust?
I am a fool for you.
Your face, touch and soul
Keeps me here
Do you see why I can’t stay here anymore???
I wish I could fully tell you what I am feeling.
My head is screaming as I cry.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:29 pm

Fools’ hope
Dreamers’ lane
Feeling so high
A story waits to be told
All high bets
As the demons play their songs
Hands reached out for help
No one there because of this rage
Brother, Sister
Lover, Enemy
Birth, Death
Screaming voices
Hate that rising
Lost of self
Rage blind you

Falling so fast as I think of what could had been
Sitting here at 4 in the mornowing
And all I see your face
The last time I saw it
Words that were said
I never got to say I am sorry…
It hurts that you told that you were leaving
There was nothing I could say or do to change it
It was because the way I acted one fateful night
My true self got the best of me.
And now your blood is on my hands.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:04 am

wah, that's a lot. I haven't had time to finish them...

Well, I'll just say what I like better.

Love, it's a wonderful poem ^^ -- Catches me.

Warriors oath to you, I see the images appearing, and the actions leading to another -- the story unfolding.

Pieces, it is really close to me. You explained the feelings to the dot!

Wonderful! Love them all!! Keep adding, though I'll need quite some time to read, your poems are long, and I'm a really slow reader.
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PostSubject: Re: written words   Fri Aug 07, 2009 3:58 pm

Set of poems that all gose together but stand well by theirself.

Poet
Words on paper
Moves the Strong and weak alike
I have on my side a voice of color
My word are written on the sands of time
Many will know me as a Spiritual soul
The word of Poet will move everybody just by words
I was chosen by Nyx to write down her words.


High Priestess
Chosen friends are hard
They must be true even when you have some kind of power
Yet it is hard been me
When everyone looking up at me for answers
I feel that I must be sometimes wiser then my years.
All I can say is I will do my best to be a good leader and friend
I didn’t asked to be High Priestess but I was chosen to be
I will do my best in doing Nyx’s will.


Air
Always around
Can be care free
But yet pushy at times
Is something to fear and love?
Without me there is no life
Air were part of everyone


Fire
Pictured as rage and hate
But is so much more
Am graceful, loving and warm
Dancer of flames
Warm voices
Without Fire there is no raging love


Water
Life started with water
Making up everybody
Pure and claim
Crystal clear as ones future
Always flowing
Water bringer of life and love


Earth
Our very home
Strong as a single mother
Surpoting everything
Can and will show rage as a mother
Sadly she is batter with stupid things
Earth our one true mother


Spirit
Is everything
You can’t touch it
But you can feel it
Essences of it presences
It makes everything what it is
Spirit the guider


Circle Poem
We are crazy and leaders
Brothers and sisters
The circle is family
Family is belonging to something more
Eyes on us always
But we are one … we are strong
We are leaders
We can do anything as long as we have each other
We are the Circle


Circle’s Code
We hold these cold
As clear as each other
A promise that can’t be broken easily
Characters that we bear
Understanding as Air
Loving as Fire
Claiming as Water
Caring as Earth
Bounding as Spirit
We know there is more than being in the circle
Then the power given to us
We promise to up hold all
That is asked of us to the best we can


Red Moon
Oh, Bright Red Moon,
In the sky above us
We asked of favor from thee

To keep our faith high in all that we believe in
Weather it be in you or just some greater out there that we believe in
For a good harvested when the time comes
Many things can be harvested from food, love, wisdom and friendship
And may you be smiling down on us
To show that we are truly loved by someone and this circle

Let us face anything bravely
For you is the last full moon of the summer nights
As we look around us
Let us enjoy the change around us
From the leaves colors to cold nights
You started of school and learn from others

Let us have open minds to everything we shall learn this month and more
The wisdom she shares to us tonight will be with us as we will grow to love Nyx and thee
The thing is she lives in us all as our goddess Nyx dose.
We thank you for what you share with us.

Thank you Red Moon
Thank you Nyx!


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:29 pm

Oh yeah, great that you've posted them up here! You don't know how much I love them!!

Still loving poet poem as always! <3333

And yeah, spirit rocks.

I love the circle oath as well, so true!!!

<3ing your poetry!! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:40 pm

Images…
Drip, Drip goes the sound of rain
Cold breath upon my neck
Vision blurring in and out…
Under the chain of my enemy
Kicked at
Cursed out
P!ss on
What a life!
Try your best to make me
Bend and brake
I know that there is no released for me
The pounding in the back of my head
Because of the images play like a slideshow
Images of Pain, love, and lost


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:33 am

I can totally see the images piecing themselves to form a story. Wonderful one water guard!
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PostSubject: Re: written words   Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:58 pm

thank you ger
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PostSubject: Re: written words   Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: written words   Sun Oct 18, 2009 12:16 pm


Wild beast
Shadow standing there
just birght as the day
as the night comes to a close
bones shitfing
a cold breezed comes over me
as the sun rised up as i looked
i see a monster in me
as if i was a human looking at me for the frist time
unknown that scears the souls of soo many.
yet i don't see myself as a monster anymore
just another beast of lust and wild calls
now i sit and wait for the moon to rise again just so that i could be my whole self again
just called me Wild Beast that runs and hunts and calls out for other of my kind
saddly there is no other like me here or around here...



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PostSubject: Re: written words   Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:32 am

forsaken

the forgoten,
that wounder around this world
wishing to be remember yet again
set their fire once more
to burn the heart of enemies and friends alike
show that the forsaken ones will rise up once more
light the sky every colors
letting everything go
fighting to be
laugh in the rain
dream of the future.


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PostSubject: Re: written words   Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:55 pm

great poem hun




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PostSubject: Re: written words   Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:57 am

A nicely written poem, a few spelling errors and I don't get this line.

"fighting to be"

It is incomplete and doesn't make sense in the context.

I read "Light the sky with every color", don't know just feel that it sounds better that way.

I love that line most btw.

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PostSubject: Re: written words   Thu Nov 19, 2009 7:10 pm

fighting to be... means to fight to live. i think it more poetiet that way.
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PostSubject: Re: written words   Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:43 pm

i believe the way you wrote it is perfect. it makes sence and i can see what its about




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