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PostSubject: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 15, 2011 11:38 pm

Feelings

Have you ever felt,
Things weren't ment to be?
Have you ever envied.
another relationship,
thinking yours wasn't enough,
could be better.
Have you ever wished,
that one person was next to you,
every second,
of every day,
kissing you soft and sweet.

Wishing isn't a sin,
neither is hoping,
the envy I could live without.
I wish each night,
upon a lone star,
that you will see,
how much I really care,
how much I truely love you,
how much more we could talk.


Departure

I sit with my family,
The airport full of uniforms,
My mother cries to know I’ll be gone,
My brother doesn’t understand,
My father, no expression.
My bag sits next to me,
I’m ready to go.
I know I will be helping all over the world.
No need to cry now,
If I do, I will feel weak.
My family gives me hugs,
I say good-bye to my friends,
I straighten my uniform.
I promise to write each day,
And to put my mom at rest,
I say I’ll watch my back.
“Philadelphia to Germany,
Five o’clock boardings,
Gate thirteen is now open.”
The announcer says.
I say my last good-byes,
Give my last hugs,
And stand in line.
My fellow soldiers surround me,
As I board the plane,
I can’t turn back now,
I am fighting for my country.
Bravery, patriotism, and strength
The main things we all share.
We went through training and more,
Just to get to this point,
We’ll never look back on our decisions,
We fight for our country instead.
The departure changes your life forever,
You’ll never look back on your mistakes,
Fighting for your country,
Will change you forever,
You will never be the same.



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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:01 am

Close to the heart. hits home hard. I get that sort of feeling quite a lot. Keep writing!
I'll comment as much as i can, and i hope that you can do likewise for my stories and poems (:

thank you in advance.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:52 pm

Give Me One Reason

Give me one reason,
Just one,
On why I should trust you,
With all my heart and soul.

Sometimes it feels like,
You don’t trust me,
You’re hiding something,
Something you don’t want to tell me.

But what reasons can you give me?
Reasons that I should trust you,
Reasons why you trust me,
Reasons why you should be the only one on my mind.

Give me one reason,
Just one,
On why I should trust you,
After you broke my heart in two.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:17 pm

I love your poems.
They're so true.
If you get what I'm saying.
Keep writing.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:18 pm

thank you <3 I have like hundreds in note books in my room.. nobody knows about any of them..
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:20 pm

Well...
I know about them now..lol
From reading these, you really are good.
And i would love to read any others that you post
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:21 pm

thanks <3 if you pm me I can tell you where you can find a bunch more Smile
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:38 am

I stand,
my back to the wall,
I here my parents fighting.
See the shadows of them yelling:
Dark against the wall.

Mom ran out crying,
Dad collapsed on the couch,
I don't know who needs the comfort more,
so I run to my room with my brother.

We sit there,
hugging,
we never have gotten along until now.
You are too young to understand.
I-I just can't understand what happened.

Soon, mom has moved out,
dad has moved on,
i look at the knife in my hand,
it releived all the emotional pain i felt.
And it did for half a year.

Summer came around,
I had to stop,
people would suspect if I wore long sleeves.
People would call me out.

Later I met my boyfriend,
he made everything i did seem distant,
he made everything seem stupid.
He helped my find myself,
helped me stay sane.

He keeps me sane still,
since april 13th,
altough we barely talk,
when we do,

all i do,
is smile,
laugh,
regret messign up my arm.

brian, you keep me from cutting myself,
even when i want to the most,
even when I am being bullied,
even when I am being yelled at by my power hungry dad,
even when my brother is being the bulley he is,
even when my mom is mad at me for no reason.
no matter what.

i love you,
with all my heart,
and all my soul,
forever and always <3
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:44 am

It's nice that you've such a person around you, let you see that, at least there's some good in the world. Savour every moment of it, be grateful, well, I think you already are.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:02 pm

Best Friend

a best friend is always there,
through your sad days,
happy days,
moody days,
days you just cant explain.
you tell each othereverything,
every kiss,
every crush,
every event,
everything!
you become closer then friends,
more like sisters.


a best friend,
will accept you,
if you turn whorish,
or goth,
or emo,
or peppy,
or snobby,
or anything else you can think of.


i love my best friend,
but one person is
more then just a friend,
of all my friends,
best friends,
true friends,
frenemies,
any friend,
one stands above the standards of an ordanary friend.


she's my sister,
i love her,




Music

when words fail,
Music speaks.
Music is my life,
without it:
where would i be?


I'd be depressed all the time,
I wouldnt have the people i love and care about most,
or alife.
i wouldn't be smart,
i wouldn't be happy,
i wouldnt be writing this poem.


without music,
i'd have no words,
my words always fail,
they will never succeed,
music is my world.




Mommom

being in your house today,
empty house,
but still full of memories.
i tryed my hardest not to cry,
my last grandparent alive,
i don't want to loose you.
i barely hear your laugh,
but when i do i smile.
mommom,
i love you,
i miss you,
i live with going days on end without seeing you,
but i get by with the sound of your voice.
i remember when i would sit,
with a pot,
on a chair,
pretending it was the stove,
while you cooked chicken noodle soup,
my imagination was zooming around the pot infront of me.
i remember watching you fall,
i cryed because i was so scared.
i remember me breakiing my nose on your porch.
sleeping on the couch,
sleeping on the floor,
making cookies,
making food,
drawing pictures,
writing my alphabet,
being in that car accident,
you being scared that i had whiplash.
mommom,
when i can't see that house anymore,
i know i'll cry,
memories, pure memories,
will always remind me why.
i love you,
don't ever leave,
i'd miss you way to much




Poppop

i've been thinking so much about you lately,
i loved you when you were alive,
i still love you to this day.
i miss you so much,
memories buzz in and out of my head.
the day you fell,
holding your hand as the life support was turned off,
your life slipping away.
you watching for my bus,
every morning.
when dad got in the way,
you'd make a smart comment.
you made me laugh until i cryed,
you were my life back then.

i remember the last birthday,

i got to spend with you,

krispy creame donuts,

i miss those days so much.
i miss you so much,
the memories don't help.
when ever i look at my brother,
i see you.
writing this poem,
all i see is a blur,
because, poppop,
i loved you.
why'd you have to go?



See

I see things that other people do not.
I see shapes in the clouds that people always miss.
I see images that other people do not see at all.
I can see figures you will never see.
I see creatures and lives that others do not believe in.


How can I see these things you do not?
Is a sixth sense what I have?
Can you believe me when I say this?
Is it believable?
I see you don’t believe,
But seeing is believing.
So come with me,
And you’ll see what I see.


I can see truths in the lies,
I can see when people are hiding something.
I see you, you hiding from the truth.
I see you don’t believe me,
I see people hiding, people crying.
I see people have died,
I see when people talk about you, about me.
Why don’t you believe?
Why is it so hard?
Do you have to see it,
To believe it to be true?
If I show you, would you believe me?
I see you still don’t.
Seeing is believing,
So let me show you what I
See.




Heart

I’m with you where ever you go,
If it weren’t for me, you’d be dead.
I power all your organs,
Pump blood through all your veins.
I am the reason you live.


I hate when you eat fast food,
You block my arteries with cholesterol.
Once you have eat to much,
I will stop beating,
I’ll fail,
The doctors will do all they can.


When they tell you to be healthy,
To eat healthy foods,
To walk or run each day.
You get upset, you stress out,
You want to change,
But you just can’t!


With tempting foods all around you,
You’ll never be at peace,
I’ll warn you once and a while,
However, it will never be enough to help you out.


You obviously don’t love me,
I see you just don’t care,
But as a heart, I will always love thee.
When I stop beating one day,
When all your family mourns you,
They will forget to mourn me.


As a heart I care about you,
But if you don’t care about me, you WILL die.
Please take care of me,
I am your loving heart
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 23, 2011 8:06 pm

Beautiful.
I love how you poem's reflect your life.
It makes them even moer touching.
keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Fri Dec 23, 2011 9:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:04 am

Whoa I have no clue on where to begin with your poems... There just so amazingly beautiful! I’ve cried reading many of them (A Good way of course) because the way they are written touches me emotional that I can relate to them. I hope to hear more very soon =) Keep writing please =)

My Favorites Are (In No Order)

Feelings
Best Friend
Poppop
Mommom
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:18 am

Thank you so much Smile I have been trying to type my hundreds of them Smile so soon there will be a bunch up Smile
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:46 pm

Your Welcome And Thats Awesome Ill Read Them Whenever I Find Time. =) Also I Was Wondering If The Poem In The Cyan Color As A Title? Because Its Really Lovely And One Of My Favorites =)
Also Hope You Could Comment & Look At My Poems =)
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sat Jan 14, 2012 1:02 pm

Noo, i didn't post the title, because i didn't hav eone for it. al lot of my poems don't have titles. and I will certainly read yours!

And here ar emore poems :

To the love of my life;
First kiss,
First boyfriend,
First person to hold my hand,
First person to care,
First Person I have ever truly loved.

Even through my flaws,
I know you will be right there,
Standing by my side,
Encouraging me to keep myself safe.

After you’re out of High School,
I know we will be super close,
I can't wait until after college,
We really do love each other.

My dad thinks we're going to be on and off,
But I know we won't,
I know you're going to talk me out of anything stupid,
You try your best <3 !

I love you, weirdo,
You are my weirdo,
Always will be,
But that’s why I love you.

You own my heart,
I can prove it:
All you have to do,
Is ask me one question,
Say one word,
And I will instantly perk up.
The sound of your voice,
Is wonderful to me,
It makes my head spin round,
I go head over heels.

I trust you with my life,
Heck, - I'd trust you to feed me.
I'd trust you with anything,
I trust you to keep me from doing stupid things,
I know you can talk me through anything,
Because you know me better then I even know myself!
You know my weaknesses,
My strengths,
The things that make me laugh,
Everything,
You can read me!

I love you,
Always will.

Love,
Allison

(that one above was what i entered for the poetry contest this month.)


Hogwarts

Hogwarts is a place,
where I can be myself,
where everyone is the same,
but still different.
Which ever house you are in:
Slytherin -
Home to the cunning.
myserious,
dark and pure.
Gryffindor -
home to the Brave,
the house of the "best"
innocent but not so innocent.
Ravenclaw -
House of the wise,
found a bit strange,
intresting but very weird.
Hufflepuff -
Home to the loyal,
not many of them can be found today,
also weird but kind of cool.

Howarts,
where I can be me,
hang with my friends,
travel to Hogsmede.
Hogwarts,
not real,
but certainly real to all us potterheads/
Potter heads,
the geeks of the muggle world,
wheater a
Slytherin or Gryffindor,
Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff,
I think we should all get along,
muggle-born, half-blood or Pure,
We all have magical powers,
so just let us be,
Potterheads,
We are awesome (:


To all those who have bullied me,
called me names,
put me down,
made me insecure;
Was it really worth everything you have done?
Just to seem cool,
Just to help you feel better.
Was it worth all of my tears?
Just for you to be happy?

You were once my friends,
now you mean nothing,
are nothing to me.

I won't listen to your laughes,
I won't sink to your level,
I know you are just insecure,
I knoe you only put me down,
so you can be popular.

Popular doesn't have to be mean,
Popular is just because you have a lot of attention,
Popular by mean is nothing.

When I am older,
When I am a star.
I won't let you in,
because YOU turned your back on me.

Yours Truely,
Allison



Cherish

I cherish every moment with you,
Hang on every word you say,
Hoping each kiss will last me,
But just until the next.
Sometimes it works,
Sometimes it doesn't.
It all depends on how long we are apart.

Each kiss,
I will cherish;
Every kiss on the cheek,
Every kiss on the lips,
They'll stay in my memory forever.
I love them so much,
That is why they can last so long.

If I lean away,
or turn away from one of you kisses,
I am just nervous,
I cherish those butterflies,
because they remin me of you,
and how much I love you.

I cherish my time with you,
because all good things must come to an end,
every kiss,
every word,
every hug,
every butterfly,
every touch of our hands.
I cherish everything.



Butterflies

When you lean in to kiss me,
If I lean away,
It is not because I don't love you,
Because I doo.
The only reason is because:
When I am kissing you,
And right before I kiss you,
I get butterflies,
My heart starts racing,
I only see you,
I'm afraid I will smile while kissing you.

When I finally brace the butterflies,
the feeling we're the only people here,
That the kiss will last forever.
But when it ends,
the butterflies return,
my heart beats louder,
and I smile.
I love the butterflies,
they only remind me,
of how much I truely love you.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:27 pm

I can’t feel anything without you,
Nothing but pain and regret.
I miss you so much,
The way you text,
The way you talk,
The way you make me feel.

I feel so stupid,
Why did I let this happen once more?
Everyone says it’s good for me,
So I just put on a face to make them all happy,
When in reality,
All I want,
Is you,
You by my side,
You to dry my tears,
You to comfort me.

All I have left is a broken heart,
I know yours is broken too,
So why not admit that we are meant to be,
That we love each other,
That we can’t live without each other.

You gave me the choice,
I choose wrong,
I don’t want to be like this.
Tears rolling down my face every second.
I don’t think I have a tear left,
But then I prove myself wrong,
Another tear slips from my eye,
Another day is spent weeping,
More depressing songs are played,
Because I want to remember all the times we had.

I sit here typing this poem,
Wishing so desperately you’ll read it,
But I know you won’t.
You never read my poems.
So I’ll sit here and cry,
Watch my tears hit the keyboard.
Watching the letters grow blurry,
I bring the poem to an end.

Here the poem ends,
Just like my heart will stop beating,
If you decide to never love me again.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:29 pm

Dreams

I look into your eyes,
Your bright blue sparkling eyes,
Listen to your voice,
Your low deep voice,
My arm is touched by your hand,
Your soft, cold hand.

I could dream of you,
You about to kiss me,
Me wake up just as your lips touch mine,
Why can I not be more like you?

Now I know,
That everything I saw,
Everything I felt,
Was only a wonderful,
DREAM.



Should love feel like this?
Pain each day you don't speak,
A new heart break around every corner,
The sound of my heart,
Beating loudly;
Boom, Boom!
Boom, Boom!
Like a drum keeping a steady beat.

Should love feel like this?




Why?

Why can you not tell me?
Now is not the time to let me be,
Who back stabbed me the third,
The final time, no bird.
You cannot tell me, you say.
Well I'll cause you dismay.

From time to time again,
I will always give him a ten.

No matter what you suggest,
He always pasts the test,
The test of my beating heart.
He may be tart,
He is perfect to me,
As perfect as can be,
I am in love with him,
He is not one bit dim,

Tell me why you didn't give me,
The number of my love to be,
And why you speak,
When I am at my peak.



So Much

So much for forever&always,
So much for you and me,
We obviously weren't meant to be.
I loved you,
You "liked" me,
What I thought would last forever,
Lasted a little more then 9 months.

All I want now,
Is to go back to April 13th, 2011
And tell myself;
Exactly what I know now.

I loved you hugs,
I loved your kisses,
I miss them so much,
I miss you more.

So much for forever&always,
So much for you and me,
So much for everything I thought you were.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:09 pm

You are very much like myself when it comes to feelings and emotions, it seems. For me, i express myself better in writing than in speaking it. You, like myself, pour your heart out onto the paper and that's so amazing to read. You are so very talented and I believe that you will go far with your writing Smile Keep up the good work, FallenInLove. I hope to read more.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:11 pm

Thank you Smile and we ARE very much the same, my name is Allison (: I always tend to pour my heart into either poems or wirting letters and stories.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:18 pm

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Thank you Smile and we ARE very much the same, my name is Allison (: I always tend to pour my heart into either poems or wirting letters and stories.

You are very welcome. And that's cool that we have the same names Smile Would you like to know something funny about the whole, pouring my heart out into my writing ?
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:21 pm

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You are very welcome. And that's cool that we have the same names Smile Would you like to know something funny about the whole, pouring my heart out into my writing ? [/font]

Yeahh Smile i love finding people wth the same name as me Smile and yeeah, what would be funny though?
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:31 pm

My husband and i have been together since we were in middle school (I have graduated from college and he's in med school) and he has always known that that's how i express myself so he wrote a string of notes each taking me to another place in the house all with different things that he loves about me written on the pages and the last one was in our daughters room and he was standing there with an envelope and the letter inside said, " Will you marry me?" on it. lol. He is a lot like this too. And he's just a hopeless romantic.
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:09 pm

Allyson wrote:
My husband and i have been together since we were in middle school (I have graduated from college and he's in med school) and he has always known that that's how i express myself so he wrote a string of notes each taking me to another place in the house all with different things that he loves about me written on the pages and the last one was in our daughters room and he was standing there with an envelope and the letter inside said, " Will you marry me?" on it. lol. He is a lot like this too. And he's just a hopeless romantic.

AWWW! that is sooo cute! my bf (now ex) we had gotten together 9 months and 6 days before we broke up. We were both in middle school, and he still is but I am in High school so I think the distance tore us apart.. :/
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PostSubject: Re: FallenInLove's poems (please comment)   Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:31 pm

Yeah, distance doesn't help a relationship. I'm sorry to hear about the break up. Those can be heard.

And yeah, it was so cute! We got married on October 9, 2011. It was magical Smile I was already pregnant by then but we did have a nice honeymoon in Paris. His parents and my aunt paid for it.

But on with your poetry so that you don't get in trouble for "going off topic". lol.
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