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Blair Winters
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PostSubject: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:25 am

Light can be bad and Dark can be good.
Light can Blind you and isn't fully understood.
Sometimes light seems beautiful and easy to trust.
But when you see deep inside it can fill you with disgust.
Darkness looks frightening and cold and alone.
But inside is a warmth that you've never known.
A warmth of calmness and saftey from within.
That can comfort you and cradle you and gently pull you in.
into the darkness yet into the light.
A true light that guides you into the peaceful sleep of night.


Lesson: Everything isn't always as it seems, sometimes you have to look behind a bersons features and into heir soul to really know what they're like. Someone pretty and vibrant can be rude and mean. But someone quiet and shy can be passionate and sweet, and gentle. Sometimes its the true beauttiy of a person your searching for. Have you noticed how light can hurt you. When you wake up light gets in your eyes and it blinds you for a moment scaring you. Lights can also be pretty but they can still be hurtful and dangerous. If you look at the sun you can turn blindWhos ever been afraid of the dark. Well, have you ever thought about how quiet it is at niht, how you can hear animals andcars driving past. How its cooler and fresh. How you can look into the sky and a see a shining moon and a glittering twinkling sky. Its make you feel sleepy and tired and then when you sleep into dark and you feel good. So see how things can sometimes make a large difference.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:41 am

You have a nice rhyme dear (:
It's a nice and encouraging piece. Keep writing!
I do have a poetry thread here too, would be nice of you to leave a comment or two Very Happy

'A warmth of calmness and safety from within' I love this line the most.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:00 pm

Nice Blair,
I like it, keep writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:24 pm

Thanks guys! That nice of you guys and yes ill go check your poem out Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:09 pm

The wind blows and u stare at the amazing beauty,
You hair flaps as you lift your head to the sky,
hoping to see the stars above shining a crown of silver upon ur head.

U never notice the vast spread of the unknown,
And the adventures awaiting when u return back to your home.
And as you walk threw the darkness of the woods,
Dawn descends upon,
Ur foot steps light up the road as you travel for so long.

By: me(: lol
sorry it came to my head i just had to right it down. i loved ur poem tho blair winters!(:
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Blair Winters
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:16 pm

lol thanks i like yours also!
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:39 pm

I like your poem also sunshine.
It flows together very nicely.
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PostSubject: Re: Random Poetry that just suddenly came to.I hope it doesn't sound stupid.   Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:49 pm

Very Happy cheers High Five
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