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PostSubject: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Dec 25, 2011 1:08 pm

Okay these are my new peoms, as you read the title... Not sure what they'll be about..
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon Dec 26, 2011 3:40 pm

I laugh when people say they know me.
Do you really know me?
Do you know how I feel when i think about my life?
Do you even know what I think about?
Cause know one really knows me..
When I dint even know who I am
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon Dec 26, 2011 5:49 pm

Just because you see me smile doesn't mean I do.
It's fake, a sham... But thats me.
I don't let people see the real me..
The me thats quiet, a loner.
So I make myself loud.. always around people.
I'm not who you think I am.
I'm a shell, empty inside.
And nothing can find the key
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon Dec 26, 2011 6:06 pm

Just because you see me cry doesn't mean they are from you.
You don't deserve the tears, you never were.
If only feeling was simple.. But it isnt.
So I don't feel.
I stay emotionless.
But maybe one day I will actually be happy.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:49 am

They sweet writes. Keep qriting!
Ger

Ps: I think you need help from a mod to compress both your threads inthe poetry section into one. All writers are only allowed one thread in the poetry section. (:
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:03 pm

Thanks and alright.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 12:45 pm

Theres no such thing as happy endings.
No prince charmings to save you.
And you believe for so long that there will be a prince to save you.
That maybe you found him... But then he leaves.
You can't rely on fairytales.
Or on anyone else.
Only yourself.
Or youcould end up broken and forever lost.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:00 pm

i agree, we've came to live our lives, not to be led. We should live our own lives whether it be painful or lonely. We shouldn't rely on others, because they fall too. And when they do, it hurts more than you falling alone because you don't know how to get back up.

Pretty! Keep writing! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:07 pm

Lol defiantly. And I'll try
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:59 pm

Its wierd, how my lies don't even phase me anymore.
They just come naturally..
Telling everyone I'm alright and okay.
When deep down I know... I'm empty.
But it's better for them to just pass me by.
And forget I'm there.
So they don't see that I'm broken..
And no amount of glue and put the piece back together.
When I've lost all the pieces of my heart.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:16 pm

It may be of a different reason... but I know that feeling of mellow and emptiness. It makes u tear and then leave you worse off cause you now have a headache on top of your chilling heart. I've written such writes myself, so... even if i may not be able to explain it in words, I know how it feels. Thank you for sharing. Hits home hard.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:19 pm

Thanks, most of my poems are ways of me venting and to actually say the truth, I don't like people worrying about me. I don't like to be on peoples important lists because I know I'll disappoint them.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:41 pm

'for i'm only trouble, for i'll only disgrace, if I were to follow,
So despise me, so hate me, that way I won't feel as bad.

Don't look back, don't bother,
Even if you know i'm depressed,
Lesve mebehind, forget I ever existed,
At least I won't be a burden.'

This used to be my way of thinking... still is now. I think we're somewhat in the same boat dear. Lets' just forget about others, live our own lives, we've had enough of thinking for them, time to spare some time to think for ourselves.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:44 pm

True, and my Prinicple even asked me if I was depressed because I put some of my poems up on my locker. I lied and started laughing and telling him I'm not but I think I am. And so all my friends and I take it as a joke but I think I probably am.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:46 pm

The smart hides, the wise writes. The crazy laugh, the sane emo.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:49 pm

I totally agree with that. besides the smart part cause I'm not smart at all.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:53 pm

Well imo, being wise is better than being smart.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:55 pm

True, my friend Jasmine S. (I know two people with the name jasmine so I'm used to doing that) says I'm really good at giving advice. But never take anyone of my own.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:18 pm

Actually, a good advisor is a poor acceptor of advice. Cause we're sort of used to it, we've been there done that. We are just advising people so that they don't follow in our footsteps and end up like us.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:49 pm

Ah, yea I'd kick Jasmine J. But if she ended up like me.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 4:21 pm

As the rain falls I stand alone.
Cold to the bone but not moving.
The rain makes things look new, prettier... Better.
So can it do the same for me?
Can it it make the smile on my face real?
Can it make me a better person?
Can I wash myself away to make way for a new me?
Can the rain save me?
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 5:14 pm

that is amazing and i agree so much you have a talent
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:36 pm

Thanks. I believe I suck at writing, but it helps me and all. I'll try and put some more up Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:22 am

This is a response to your writes in general:

Start Today

The havens dictated you
to come and suffer through
From windows have smiles flew
To you, You life is all screwed

But think again dear friend
you do get enough food
Even in the bleak darkness
there will be something good

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand

Try not to review your past
imagine a better tomorrow
Best not to dig up rusts
grab every minute, don't let it go.

Battle all the dark and bane
pick yourself up when you fall
There's a rainbow after rain
Even you can break the walls

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand

[Bridge]
You may not have much
but you have life
It can be a painful march
but you can strife

So just move on from today
start a fresh page every day
Don't care, just think of a way
to keep grievance by the bay

Some day God will send a man
to lead you to another land
so don't worry, just take my hand
never should you stop and stand


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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed Dec 28, 2011 2:30 am

Thats awesome.
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