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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Thu Dec 29, 2011 6:10 pm

True. Sometimes I say im not sure.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:14 am

It is funny too, that my friends say they'd help me whenever I needed it and they refuse to review my writes lol. My friends aren't very much into literature, don't bother about lyrics and poetry until they have to.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:25 am

I couldn't survive without writing! one time my friend litterally took all my things except a story I was writing and a pen. She wouldn"t give anything back until I finished the last chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sat Dec 31, 2011 9:24 pm

Time to say it.
I don't want to see you,
To see you crash in your own mess.
In your lies.
I'm done watching you use people.
Because I'm crying over what you've done.
I say this into the mirror looking at myself.
watching my own regrets.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:22 pm

Hey, it would be nice if you could join 'The Poetry War'. It is a poetry contest. just click on the image in mmy signature to be redirected to the thread (: thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:08 pm

Haha alright. I'll click on it.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:41 am

I'm my worst mistake..
Everything I do ends badly..
I hurt people I care about.
And lie that I hate the people my friends do,
even though I wish I were still close to them..
I feel like I'm losing my best friend..
That I'm like paper, easy to destroy and never the same after you put it back together.

I'm my worst enemy..
I bring myself down,
Tell myself I'm not worth it.
Say I'm a failure, and always will be.
I can't even look at myself straight.
Without pointing out every flaw.

I feel robotic, empty...
That when I'm somewhere, i'm not really there.
That my mind and heart are somewhere else..
Hiding..
scared to be seen.
But I deal, because I know that I wont find them.

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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:25 am

I like it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 08, 2012 4:10 am

Thanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 08, 2012 4:39 am

You're welcome Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:43 pm

I can't believe I did that again.
But I did.
And I reget it.
Even if it helped.
People are mad at me
I'm mad at me.
And it makes me want to cry even more.
I just have to be strong.
I always have to be strong..
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:09 pm

This is pretty good Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:16 pm

thankies Smile i know its been a bit since I put a poem up
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:03 pm

It's okay. Sometimes it takes us a little bit for something to come to us. You are really talented! Keep it up Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:53 pm

Thank you and I try
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:57 pm

You're welcome Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:53 pm

I'm grounded but I'll try to post more Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:07 pm

Picking up the broken pieces of glass I see
I girl with dark hair..
Dark eyes... Full of what?
Emotion?
Emptyness?
A girl with black nails.
Marks on her arms showing her pain.
Hidden behind sweatshirts.
A dream wanting to be full filled..
Tears constantly falling..
Not knowing who she really is.
A girl who wants to be true..
But how do I get you to understand?
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:08 pm

Last night was like everynight.
I saw you again and it hurt.
No matter how the dream changes, you there.
Making me see what haunts me and that I'm a lone.
You were the only person who understanded me.
To get me to feel, and now you're gone.
It amazes me that I haven't gived up on myself.
Well, not all the way.
But I thought you would be the glue,
Thought you'd be the one to pull me out of my own hell.
But you just let go and I fell back in.
But you are still standing there,
Like you...
Mocking me.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun May 13, 2012 6:07 pm

All I wanna do is walk.
And walk until there's no where else to walk to.
To be gone, and free.
With no ties or feelings behind.
Just to start fresh and never look back.
But what I'd I turn to him?
What then, would he hate me?
Help me?
Or let me drown in my own death.
How do I make it day by day when i keep wondering what if?
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Sun May 13, 2012 6:19 pm

I like it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon May 14, 2012 7:38 am

Your poems are really good but some of them need some little bits adding to but altogether they are fine. Keep trying and some more will come to you. I like them all. Smile keep it up Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon May 14, 2012 10:06 pm

Thanks.
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Another sign,
Another fear.
Im lost but im starting to figure out.
I dont wanna be found,
Itll lead to pain, and guilt and tears.
I cant do that.
To him, my closest friend.
Or you, the guy my mind keeps going back to.
Cant i just ignore this?
Can i hide?
From eberyone?
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Wed May 23, 2012 4:06 pm

I'm sick of it.
Of everything I have to deal with.
But no one understands,
How much it hurts and how much I need the pain to take it away.
Of how much I wish I could just fall into those arms and feel better,
That i an be there and feel like nothing bad ever happened to us.
But like everything else in my life.
It never happens.
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PostSubject: Re: My new poems... Probably will suck   Mon Dec 10, 2012 1:22 pm

cheers
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