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PostSubject: The Poetry War    Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:42 pm

Hi everyone,
*PrincessofDarkness*, ashestoroses (ash) and I (Ger) have seen that many of you here have the talent to write. Thus, we have decided to to hold a poetry contest for everyone of you on this board. This contest will be held on a monthly basis and we hope that all of you will send in your valued entries.

some really simple rules:
each member is entitled to a maximum of three poems, no more. You can choose to only submit one.
You are to ensure all works are clean -- error-free. Poems with errors will be judged not to your favour.

We hope that this contest can become a regular contest for everyone!

This is the competition timeline:
the thread will be opened for 3weeks (until the third week of the month) for entries to be submitted, after which it will be closed for judging. Results will be posted in hall of fame and the winner will receive a graphic to add in the signature. ( Graphic will be sent to the winner via PM).

There is a possibility for having second and third place as well, if the poets are really good.

If you have any queries or what-not, feel free to PM either of us!

Graphic for the Winner:



LAST DAY TO SEND IN ENTRIES: 24th JANUARY 2012, Follow GMT +8HRS


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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:16 pm

((I'll submit a poem I have recently made (: ))

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Darkness controls you by giving you scars.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:02 am

((Thanks. We need more entries and more people! D:))
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:50 pm

Were You Belong

One step closer...
Before I fall
Who knew I could be so lost
Longing to see you once more
You disappeared to a different world,
One that I can’t go to till the end
It pains me to not be able to visit you

This amazing world,
Your every desire comes true
It takes away the blues
Flowers bloom
Music is played
Laughter fills the air
I want to share it all with you
But, you are gone…

It’s impossible to make you leave
It’s maddening to see you gone
The place where you are now…
Is where you are meant to be isn’t it?
With new sight you watch over me
You smile your angelic smile
You are at peace now

I know it’ll be okay… and maybe one day
I’ll see you in my beautiful world
The one I escape to avoid pain

This isn’t the end I'm aware
Though this new beginning is something I can't bare
Just so you know I care
Hopefully, someday I'll understand


Beautiful Creature

Meaningless words
Come from your voice
You would be a fool
To believe it.

Poisonous kisses that
Could kill you slowly

Strong arms you held her in
That could crush her so easily.

Love that was never true
Breaking her inside
She is nothing but a hollow shell now

Slowly, she died because of the poison
She was a fool when it came to loving you
With her last breath you crushed her in your arms
Proving to her what monster you were

How do I know such thing?
I was that girl falling for the beautiful creature now look
At me now.

I’m dead.



A Promise

Life’s passing by so quickly
You are afraid to blink.
Heart races one moment
Then breaks the next
You are afraid to love.
One good thing one moment
The next it’s gone
You are afraid to trust
Please don’t be afraid… you still
Have me.
I may not fix it the problems
But I’m here to support you
In this crazy world and that is a promise.
Until one day I break it that is.







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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:00 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:22 am

Love or Hate

Love I cared.
You treated me before
like you love me.
Now you hate?

I cared about you
my whole life.
Then you treated me
like you hate me
and love someone
else.

You love me
I hate you
All those years ago
you let go.
I did not I held
on forever.

You want to care
for me again.
Think again.
I will never love
you again.

I treated you like
crap before this
happened I loved you.
Now you treat me
like crap. We are even
now.

Happy? I will
still not love
you. I still
will not love
anyone other
and never again.

Love me? Hate
me? It is mixed up
you can’t decide
to love me or
hate me.

Love you? Hate
you? Still a mix
still no decision
either or of
the two

you leave me.
I leave you.
I will never forget
this. You will never
forget this I know
it.

What is your
decision? Love or
Hate.

Hate is forever
and you will
never see me again.

Love; well that
is a different
story. You will
always see me.

So what is it?
Love or Hate.
You chose.


Dark Love

Every day, you
hid something
from me. When
you say you love
me you walk away
saying Dark Love.

I am not scared of
you not even when
you try scaring me.

I know sometimes
you think I am dark.
I figured out where you
got the saying Dark Love.

You know I come only
in the night time. And
I don’t go to school
like you. That is where
the dark part is coming from.
Love is obvious we love
each other.

I figure it out
in two days.
Soon after you started
saying it

sometimes you
say I am cold.
Some time you
say look out.

When I run I am
faster than you.
You are scared of me.
I can smell it. You
fear me but you
love me.

You know when you
love a vampire.
There are consequences
sometimes.

Your promise is
that if I die.
You would kill
yourself for me.

Your last words
you said to me
before you died
were, "Dark love
I love you." That
was my nickname.

I am writing this
poem for you.
You will always be my
Dark love.

My last words
would be if I died before you blocked that
attack would be. "I am here
for you forever."
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 11:31 am

Keep up the great poetry you guys! ♥
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:23 pm

To the love of my life;
First kiss,
First boyfriend,
First person to hold my hand,
First person to care,
First Person I have ever truly loved.

Even through my flaws,
I know you will be right there,
Standing by my side,
Encouraging me to keep myself safe.

After you’re out of High School,
I know we will be super close,
I can't wait until after college,
We really do love each other.

My dad thinks we're going to be on and off,
But I know we won't,
I know you're going to talk me out of anything stupid,
You try your best <3 !

I love you, weirdo,
You are my weirdo,
Always will be,
But that’s why I love you.

You own my heart,
I can prove it:
All you have to do,
Is ask me one question,
Say one word,
And I will instantly perk up.
The sound of your voice,
Is wonderful to me,
It makes my head spin round,
I go head over heels.

I trust you with my life,
Heck, - I'd trust you to feed me.
I'd trust you with anything,
I trust you to keep me from doing stupid things,
I know you can talk me through anything,
Because you know me better then I even know myself!
You know my weaknesses,
My strengths,
The things that make me laugh,
Everything,
You can read me!

I love you,
Always will.

Love,
Allison
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:55 am

Cancer kills
The pain I see you go through everyday
I just wish it would go away.
The sorrow in your eyes,
Scare me because you can die
Any day,
Any minute,
Any second
I want to make every second with you count
But when I think of losing you I just want to shout.
The pain is killing you.
It’s also killing me to.
Not as much
It just gives me an adrenaline rush.
I just know when I look at you my heart is in pain.
The feelings are too much to contained
Sometimes it’s hard to sleep at night.
The emotions run wild and cause me such fright.
All you can do is sit helplessly in your chair.
The pain of seeing you like this is a lot to bear.
I know the cancer will take over.
And you will be gone forever.
Now you’re gone before my eyes.
It hurts like a piercing knife.
But I know you’re in a better place.
Just my heart has an empty space... < /3
I love you always have and always will...


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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:43 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:14 pm

Brutality of Facebook

I tag the faces of those who hate,
Poke at the ones that think they can tear me down.
Yet I just upload the new software to get ride of their voices.
Screams and shout can't be heard;
For I deleted them out of my life.
I add their cries and pleas onto my charts.
No one has yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen.

I tag the lifeless and those that don't breath.
I tag them into my world of hatred and poise,
Poke at the way they fall apart.
I upload a lifeline for a rescue squad
But I don't plan to share it.
I deleted all that was pure and good, replaced it with pure evil and grim.
I add firery flames to the mix to creat a gret explosion.
No one has yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen.

Tagging life throughout the years;
Poking around in things unclear.
Uploading the images of death and sorrow;
Yet nothing is ever fair when it comes to facing tomorrow.
Deleting the thoughts of joy and happiness
Replace them with added thoughts of pain and wiry;
Share your words through silent tears.
No one had yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen.




Fantasy Kill


Screams of horror fill the house as the dramatic music builds for the climax.
I brace myself as excitement fills my body.
Nothing makes me happier than watching someone get brutally murdered.
It fills me with joy and I want to watch it again.
The killer does a sneak attack and slits her throat.

Oh! That gorgeously, marvolus throat of hers
Sprays blood everywhere as she gasps for air.
He takes his long blade and licks the blood clean.
I let my soul sore into the screen and explore the depths of the murder,
And feel my body hunger for that same thrilling factor.[/size]

[size=12]I set out to fufill my hearts desire and start my own movie.
The fear and cries for help feeds my longing soul and I advance in my makings.
I sit and watch over and over the work of art I've created until it's not enough.
New victim every month, maybe every week, until I'm bored.
I get bolder in my actions, and go to the extremes and begin to play with the corpse.

Their heavy metalic blood, thick on my lips,
Slides down my throat like ice cream.
The bodies become boring so I work on a new master piece.
Day-by-day it's starting to come together perfectly, until the blood runs dry.
My body has become my new work of art, and I'm very well pleased.



Defeat

Inside my mind there's secrets untold
Inside my eyes there's hidden sorrow.
Inside my mouth there's truths untold.
Hidden behind my smile there lies a frown.

Deep waves of regret
Hot streams of sin
Firey shots of guilt
And hard punches of anger.

Trying to hide
Trying to run
No where to go
No where to escpe.

Trapped in the world with no hope of freedom
Grief and unforgiveness takes over.
Standing waist deep in tears of rage
Walking stomach deep in fires of anger

Breathing only makes it worse
Living only make it unbareable.
Smiling only weakens
And laughingonly angers.

No fighting
No trying
No running away
No changing

Stand against it
Look beuond it
Frown upon it
And evolve it

Stand alone
Stand strong
Stand tall
Stan firm

Be with one
Be with light
Be with greatness
And be with strenght .

For you shall not be DEFEATED.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:18 pm

~Hiding behind my big brown eyes~

Do you even see the real me?
The one who wants to be happy?
The one whos tired of feeling helpless?
I want to be seen, heard.... Remembered.
But it seems I just fade away...

I want people to see who I am..
Not just some girl with unreadable brown eyes.
Who feels ugly and unworthy to be loved.
I wanna be held and promised things that people won't break.

I wanna see you smiling at me because you're proud.
Or am I asking for to much?
Is it possible I stop feeling empty?
To stop these tears that burn my cheeks..?
Or am I just unlovable? Unimportant?
Was I ever important?

That's what is hidden behind my big brown eyes.
Wishes that won't come true..
And a heart that broke to soon.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sat Jan 07, 2012 6:19 am

((Thankies!))
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:17 pm

~Fooled~
I love you.
Do you love me?
No you don't its a lie.
I can see it in your eyes,
your a fool
and I'm a jewel.
So don't break me
you'll be fooled.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Burn~
Burn baby burn
For the fire is hot,
And you cant take the heat,
I hear your screams
As tears fall down my cheek
But its what you get
When you betray
The ones you love
For those they hate.
Be bathed in fire and flam
Endure the pain,
And think of your betrayal
This was your fate
To be burned in the inferno
Burn baby burn

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~Insane~
Take time just to listen
to the voices screaming
only to find out there not real
It seems I'm going
Insane
Sane?
Insane?
and its Almost Easy
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:34 am

(thanks mom!)
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:39 am

(lol You welcome daughter!)
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 22, 2012 2:32 am

Anam Cara

Silence in the clearing.
A white wolf crosses my path.
She is my guide, my companion.
She is the lamp that lights my path.
I am her and she is me.
We are one.

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Silent Words

My language is silent.
No hearing only seeing.
My fingers fly through the air,
Creating images for the mind.
The world is my canvas,
My hands are the paintbrush.
My language is for the eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 22, 2012 12:56 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:32 pm

(when are entries stopped being taken?)
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:26 pm

AMBROSIA

Like ambrosia the gods,
Liquid crystal clear,
Sharp and brilliant
A taste to purify all immortal souls
A taste beyond the taste of heaven

Like paradise to the mortals,
Unreachable, untouchable
Bliss and joy
A place to forgive all sins
A place to redeem all souls

Like the air to humankind,
Necessary, eternal
Survival depends on it
A gift to those who live
A gift to help us live

You are all these things
You are everything
And more.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:08 am

(24th of this month (Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:49 am

Entries posted after this post will not be taken into consideration.

Sincere gratefulness to all who have so kindly sent in your entries for this competition.

Finally, thank you for your patience while the judges decide upon the winning write. Please check the hall of fame regularly, the winning piece and poet will be posted in the hall of fame.

From judges.
Princessofdarkness, Ash and Dreamer.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poetry War    Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:16 pm

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